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Celeste_2sweet
08-11-2008, 10:43 AM
Please, PLEASE review! I really like Smallville so if you know ANYONE who will want Smallville stories this is their heaven! I also give views on fashion and why I don't want to be a skank... Please review!
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L M Ashton
08-12-2008, 07:36 AM
Moved to AW Blog Reviews.

veinglory
08-12-2008, 07:53 PM
Your top post has ten blank lines for no apparent reason, other posts are folded uncomfortably around pictures. The pink on black is a little hard on my eye. Other than that I can't really comment, the content was not in my interest area (hair, looking hot etc--I guess I gave up on that a decade or two ago ;) ).

Polenth
08-13-2008, 02:41 AM
It's not my topic area either, but I found your posts jumped around. It feels like you don't spend much time editing them. You might want to consider expanding some of your points, and making sure they're clear to the reader.

For example, you put up photos without labelling which celebrity is in the photo. Give the full name of the person, because your readers might not recognise them. Rather than a simple she's hot/she's not, explain why. For products, you could review what's good and bad about them.

Look at other fashion blogs and see what they do. Think about which posts you enjoy, and why you enjoyed them. Apply that to your own blog posts.