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Pink Ink
09-07-2008, 01:26 PM
I didn't even know THIS THREAD existed until today. AW is amazing.

Anyway.

I am quaking as I say this, but I would love it if you could review my blog. I have three, but my main one is Pink Ink (http://www.pink-ink-pink.blogspot.com/). It started out as a "writer's" blog, but has evolved to more of a personal one.

I didn't want to bore non-horsey people with my horse tangents, so I started a horse one, Green-Broke (http://green-broke.blogspot.com/).

And then finally, I felt inspired to do one on my suspense/horror fiction fetish, so I started Black-Out (http://its-black-out.blogspot.com/).

Any feedback on any of them would be appreciated, in particular:

What is your first impression?
After reading the recent posts, what do you think am I trying to accomplish?
How do the posts read? Do they feel compelling? Too long? Too short?
What do you like?
What can I improve?

Critique away and THANKS!

Susan Breen
09-07-2008, 06:51 PM
I thought it looked great and I tried to post a comment on your Madonna post, but for some reason my google password isn't working. The colors are great and the content is fun to read.

GLAZE_by_KyrstinMc
09-07-2008, 07:14 PM
Great job. Your words are very clear, and well chosen. :)

Woodsie
09-07-2008, 07:30 PM
I am a visitor of yours. :) Since about two weeks ago anyway.

You're the only one in our little blogging sphere who I can connect an identity to this forum. I know the others are here, but I don't know who they are....

Pink Ink
09-07-2008, 07:47 PM
Susan: Mmm. I wonder why. Too bad, I'd have liked to read what you have to say :-) Thanks.

KyrstinMC: Thanks.

Woodsie: I know. I've blown my cover :-). Thanks for the visits...and the comments.

Fenika
09-07-2008, 08:55 PM
Hi Pink,
I was just looking at your Green Broke blog. I love it, but I have some feedback:

Your latest entry (History:....) is what I read first and I wasn't sure who everyone was or why you were discussing winter ;) It made more sense as I read on though. I saw your ranch entries and thought they were very nice. My only complaint is you should add more details. You really started to paint a nice picture there, so please take it further :)

Can I add a link to your blog from my blog? Project Horses (http://projecthorses.blogspot.com/)

Pink Ink
09-07-2008, 09:07 PM
Thanks Bahamutchild! That is very helpful. I will probably put a little lead-in about the History entries for someone who has not been following my blog since its inception. As for details, since this is my secondary blog, I don't spend as much time on it as I'd like.

And yes, definitely! I'd love to be linked. Thanks!

Celeste_2sweet
09-10-2008, 08:36 AM
How did I NOT leave a comment here?! Oh well, it was so good, pink ink is really funny! I better go and get my daily dose!
Celeste

Pink Ink
09-10-2008, 07:31 PM
Thanks Celeste. Check it out again; I just went to a totally different format on "Pink Ink". Tell me what you think.