gophergrrrl
10-26-2008, 09:27 PM
In the script I'm working on, I've been teeder-tottering back and forth with a few of the sluglines and wondering which choice of words I should use each time and stick with. Let me list my headings so you can see what I mean:
Int. roth's bedroom - day
int. - hallway - continuous
int. roth's bedroom - continuous
ext. lenneman house - driveway - moments later
int. downstairs - living room - moments later
int. downstairs - living room - moments later
int. upstairs - bathroom - continuous
INT. DOWNSTAIRS - LIVINGROOM - MOMENTS LATER
int. Roth's bedroom - night
int. hallway - continous
All of these take place in the Lenneman house throughout the story, but I'm confused as to whether I should stick with refering to it as 'Lenneman House - Roth's Bedroom' or just use a simple "Roth's Bedroom". I'm also wondering if some of the 'continuous' headers should not actually be sluglines, but rather just use a transition like "Downstairs". It's confusing because its a rather simple problem, and I feel like I should already know the answer...
So what reference should I go with? I feel like it needs continuity so that it doesn't look messy. Help?
Int. roth's bedroom - day
int. - hallway - continuous
int. roth's bedroom - continuous
ext. lenneman house - driveway - moments later
int. downstairs - living room - moments later
int. downstairs - living room - moments later
int. upstairs - bathroom - continuous
INT. DOWNSTAIRS - LIVINGROOM - MOMENTS LATER
int. Roth's bedroom - night
int. hallway - continous
All of these take place in the Lenneman house throughout the story, but I'm confused as to whether I should stick with refering to it as 'Lenneman House - Roth's Bedroom' or just use a simple "Roth's Bedroom". I'm also wondering if some of the 'continuous' headers should not actually be sluglines, but rather just use a transition like "Downstairs". It's confusing because its a rather simple problem, and I feel like I should already know the answer...
So what reference should I go with? I feel like it needs continuity so that it doesn't look messy. Help?