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Winterchase
03-21-2006, 12:17 AM
I have a "must be seen/read" sign - name of the company, it's address and telephone number - on the side of a utility van. How on Earth is that written in a script?

xhouseboy
03-21-2006, 01:54 AM
I would just simply show it in the narrative.


The VAN has ********** printed on the side.

scripter1
03-21-2006, 06:39 PM
write it how it's seen.

A van passes by.
STINKIES DIAPER SERVICE 4NO-POOP

Show us something like this though and you'd better use it.

Winterchase
03-22-2006, 10:01 PM
write it how it's seen.

A van passes by.
STINKIES DIAPER SERVICE 4NO-POOP

Show us something like this though and you'd better use it.

You're scary, Scripter1. :D Like, you lifted the remark from the treatment(?):

... threatens to slap the woman. She dares him to. To show her who is "boss," he starts to nuzzle the child - but checks up, because of the smell.

Bryan, shielded by the shrubbery, can't help eavesdropping.

Jose announces he's found the box of diapers and...

... the woman puts the baby down on the back seat and starts changing it while the men start cramming things back in the trunk as fast as they can.

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Maria tosses the soiled diaper over the shrubbery, and it hangs on a branch on the other side.

scripter1
03-23-2006, 06:00 PM
you're good. ;)