bluejester12
04-22-2006, 08:48 AM
Final Draft 7 has me confused. Should there be an extra space before the slug, or is it spaced like the action---or does it matter?
Drake watches stoically as his father COUGHS, blood trickling from the corners of his mouth. He rattles a last breath and becomes still.
Leave the jeep, pass over the smoking village and statue of St. Nicholas to--
EXT. ROOFTOP OF CHURCH - DAY
A BOY sits against a balustrade, weeping. A rifle lies across his legs. Mud is smeared across his face in the rough shape of a snake.
Drake watches stoically as his father COUGHS, blood trickling from the corners of his mouth. He rattles a last breath and becomes still.
Leave the jeep, pass over the smoking village and statue of St. Nicholas to--
EXT. ROOFTOP OF CHURCH - DAY
A BOY sits against a balustrade, weeping. A rifle lies across his legs. Mud is smeared across his face in the rough shape of a snake.