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moblues
12-26-2006, 12:36 PM
searching
what will you find?
is it God that you seek?
all you have to do is look deep
inside



Happy Holidays




Mike

4rum
12-27-2006, 01:45 PM
inside
inside of hope
clinging, gasping, longing
I'd settle for but one wee smile
cast out

kborsden
12-27-2006, 09:00 PM
cast out
beyond return
always, ever exiled
spanning the expanse's bleakness
discharged

moblues
12-28-2006, 12:51 PM
discharged
now forgiven
I had once lost all hope
it's still such a slippery slope
to you

Jayne
12-28-2006, 05:25 PM
to you
I give echoes.
half-asleep as you are,
a more forceful song would only
wake you

moblues
12-29-2006, 09:12 AM
to you
I sacrifice
all that was meant for me
what my father had wished for me
for you


*edit*

I'm sorry, Jayne. I have no idea how I missed your post. Happy New Year.

P.H.Delarran
12-30-2006, 12:55 PM
wake; you
glide unoticed
under cover of grey
clouds of sorrow. no joy remains
for you

Godfather
12-30-2006, 04:25 PM
for you
my joy, money
my house, car, clothes given
in a smile, but you'll never get
my pride




(hmmm.... should it be 'my pride' or 'my words'?)
i prefer it as words.

moblues
01-01-2007, 01:19 AM
(hmmm.... should it be 'my pride' or 'my words'?)

'my words' would be beautiful with its double meaning. It could mean you don't get what I'm saying, or you'll never silence me. Great idea, but as you know, I'm biased. Great stuff, GF.

my pride
bruised, and battered
face down upon the mat
I’ve lost everything that matters
but you



With 'my words':

my words
I share with you
I freely give this gift
rip it from deep within the rift
for love

dancingandflying
01-01-2007, 03:20 AM
I am too tired to do two, so I'll choose the line of "but you". Happy new year, everyone!

But you
You make me smile
When no one else can.
It was your hug that made
me cry.

Alice.

moblues
01-01-2007, 11:37 AM
me cry?
ain’t happenin’
my old man would sock me
all of the guys would laugh at me
I can’t

Jayne
01-02-2007, 06:59 AM
I can't
remain gazing
at your marshmallow clouds!
Silly sky, clear up or let fall
the rain.

no worries, moblues. Happy New Year Everyone!

P.H.Delarran
01-02-2007, 07:04 AM
the rain
teases dry earth
hiding coyly behind
dark clouds before releasing a
downpour

Beyondian
01-03-2007, 06:03 AM
Downpour.
Kissing Raindrops.
Falling water rhythm.
Leaving the sanctity of air
To Fall

dancingandflying
01-04-2007, 05:53 AM
To Fall,
Snowflakes cause death
to the red hot leaves
on the gray barked oak trees.
And sigh.

Alice.

Ganesha
01-04-2007, 10:07 AM
And sigh
with great sad heaves
too much sickness, too much
gray skies and ponderous dark clouds
quick silver- go!
I am

did I mess up?

kborsden
01-04-2007, 07:27 PM
I am
a golden child
flung and thrown into life
regreting, forgeting all pride
I had

Jayne
01-05-2007, 06:08 AM
I had
illusive grace.
Filled my head like fire,
a desperate, flaming heat smothered.
Nothing.

kborsden
01-05-2007, 07:35 PM
nothing
does disipate
as dust does fall to grounds
in weary yet leery consort
I know

moblues
01-06-2007, 12:37 PM
I know
what the crows know
they peck at my window
only I can understand them
my friends

limitedtimeauthor
01-06-2007, 12:49 PM
My friends -
Another poem
That involves counting
On my fingers like a kid
in Math.

wyzguy
01-07-2007, 09:28 AM
In math
my world makes sense.
One plus one equals two.
But you changed you and me into
just us.

limitedtimeauthor
01-07-2007, 09:41 AM
Just us
alone at last
no kids, no dog, no
clue what we should talk about.
Hi, you.

P.H.Delarran
01-07-2007, 10:22 AM
Hi, you.
simple greeting
accepted and returned
heavy with anticipation,
longing

Godfather
01-07-2007, 04:37 PM
longing
for the good times
and bang bang here they are.
there they go. in a flash. gone now,
too short.

Beyondian
01-10-2007, 05:44 AM
Too short
Toes in agony
Teetering on the brink
Of falling as I reach for things
Up high

kborsden
01-10-2007, 07:30 PM
up high
or down below
some things just pass me by
where the hell should I be looking
right now?

Godfather
01-10-2007, 11:50 PM
right now?
edge of a storm
sitting, waiting, smiling
fingers flickering, eyes flicking
and bang

ddgryphon
01-10-2007, 11:58 PM
And bang
all that you've known
falls shattered at your feet
slowly settling into silent
stillness

moblues
01-11-2007, 12:15 AM
stillness
can you hear it?
nothing within nothing
perfection is your protection
pure heart

moblues
01-11-2007, 08:20 AM
pure heart
where do I start?
the business is failing
wire money through Western Union
stay home

Jabs
01-11-2007, 11:12 AM
Stay home?
Of course darling
What do you have in mind?
She wants us to be one, naked
Sexy!

kborsden
01-12-2007, 05:05 AM
sexy
unstrained woman
with harsh and steely tongue
speaks words in silver emotion
engaged

Ganesha
01-13-2007, 08:32 AM
engaged
my limbs tangled
red lips, fast hips, tongue licks
my up is your down, all around
we sing

kborsden
01-13-2007, 08:35 AM
we sing;
songs of the dead,
songs of unsung heroes,
songs of immortal ties that bind,
our songs

Ganesha
01-13-2007, 08:41 AM
our songs
you whistle me
pursed lips form perfectly
around-my tuneless exhale, still
waiting

kborsden
01-13-2007, 08:17 PM
waiting
for your return,
for the re-embracing
of our unmerited love, lust,
passion

Ganesha
01-13-2007, 09:33 PM
passion
slow boil or
red hot and ripening
I simmer on the back burner
pungent

kborsden
01-14-2007, 02:34 AM
pungent
living odour
of bygone tears and faith
to fill my nostrils with contempt
for us

Ganesha
01-14-2007, 02:42 AM
for us
hold the vessel
a living covenant
of our legacy-the future
beholds

kborsden
01-14-2007, 02:52 AM
beholds,
my watching eye
a reflected beauty,
ghost-like image on my glasses,
just her

Ganesha
01-14-2007, 03:09 AM
just her
image shimmers
across my retinas-hunger
peaks in my soul, I need you back
I rest

kborsden
01-14-2007, 03:17 AM
I rest
my solemn case
of losing you always
the dearest treasured possesion
of mine

Ganesha
01-14-2007, 03:23 AM
of mine
how hast life taught
me- to open my hands;
set free, that which belongs to me
lovely

kborsden
01-14-2007, 03:28 AM
lovely
and predacious
shall never miss a beat
until the final bell does toll
for me

Ganesha
01-14-2007, 04:03 AM
for me
sea embraced you
siren's call- high pitched song
I waded the water, searching
risked all

kborsden
01-14-2007, 04:06 AM
risked all
just to see you
in windowed vision's true,
real and only veracity
of love

moblues
01-14-2007, 04:42 AM
of love
little is left
bloody feet to lead me
a broken heart to lead me to
my home

Ganesha
01-14-2007, 07:23 AM
my home
haunted perfume
your lingering traces
spaces full on absence of you
my love

moblues
01-15-2007, 12:16 AM
my love
yes, you my love
you told me that the rain
comes when I need to remember
your pain

Ganesha
01-15-2007, 04:56 AM
your pain
dominates me
can we clean the pain slate
or slain the pate scene clean, I mean
let's dance

moblues
01-15-2007, 06:26 AM
let's dance
kick off our shoes
kiss just like we used to
let me remember our love once
again

emeraldcite
01-15-2007, 06:59 AM
again,
we burn the words
at night to keep us warm.
The blackened paper curls, turns gray,
and falls.

Ganesha
01-15-2007, 10:37 PM
and falls
from curling lips
between sips of champaign
glass's shards- after eager toasts
rouged mouths

moblues
01-16-2007, 06:06 AM
rouged mouths
faces painted
a wig to hide a lie
the law will not protect me now
I die

Ganesha
01-16-2007, 06:31 AM
I die
hanging on truth
I lie, in state of rest
at best, my restless heart does beat
with love

moblues
01-16-2007, 06:39 AM
with love
I say goodbye
your alabaster skin
is a vision I will take with
me love

Ganesha
01-16-2007, 07:11 AM
me love
hangs about you
I paint, inspired by
your kind support, I miss you so-
life ends

moblues
01-16-2007, 07:58 AM
life ends
for a moment
our souls seek each other
embrace like they couldn't before
we burn

kborsden
01-16-2007, 06:21 PM
we burn
in infernos
and wash away the sins
of many a forgotten life
lived pain

Ganesha
01-16-2007, 09:20 PM
lived pain
only to rise up
ask for another dish
making angst my birthday present
newborn

kborsden
01-17-2007, 03:31 AM
newborn
grows family
enters a sacred child
named and ushered with only love
my child

Ganesha
01-17-2007, 08:42 PM
my child
embraced a saint
protective Archangel
walk a long lonely road away
release

moblues
01-18-2007, 08:06 AM
release
my soul, dear God
my body is battered
I ache to find my way to you
it's time

emeraldcite
01-18-2007, 08:54 AM
it's time
again for the
train to leave the station
although I have a ticket to
nowhere

Beyondian
01-18-2007, 12:33 PM
nowhere
I am alone
Sleeping in cobwebs, night,
the long-dead bosom of darkness
and death

kborsden
01-18-2007, 03:22 PM
and death
reaps souls once more
he enters silently
swiftly, stealthly without words
and steals

Ganesha
01-19-2007, 01:40 AM
and steals
our forever
more he struts among us
I break my stride-run to outwit
he waits

kborsden
01-21-2007, 01:46 AM
he waits
in looming dark
uncovered by silence
throughout the still and quiet room
inside

Ganesha
01-21-2007, 02:43 AM
inside
her fear pulsed
he was across the room
children were huddled behind him
save them

kborsden
01-21-2007, 02:45 AM
save them,
amphetamin
it rots and sours their teeth,
their ambition and self-image,
poison

Ganesha
01-21-2007, 03:28 AM
poison
glass swirled crimson
"look at me," she queried
his hazel eyes glazed, she'd lost him
small death

kborsden
01-21-2007, 05:01 AM
small death
larger story
smitten by starry eyes
aluring sexuality
succumbs

ddgryphon
01-21-2007, 02:00 PM
succumbs
quickening breaths
thoughts jumble tumble 'round
hearts melt, recast again
joining

kborsden
01-21-2007, 02:03 PM
joining
and rejoicing
in festivity's love
the night is short but not over
at all

Ganesha
01-21-2007, 09:42 PM
at all
bath water waits
flower petals yellow
release calendula fragrance
ease down

kborsden
01-22-2007, 02:05 AM
ease down
just ease on down
that soulful road ahead
your luggage and worries behind
ease up

Godfather
01-22-2007, 03:50 AM
ease up
your soul, your smile
sit with me, i got words
12 canavases stretched - i'm ready,
are you?

kborsden
01-22-2007, 03:54 AM
are you
the one I need?
the one I have longed for?
or are you just playing with me?
tell me

Ganesha
01-22-2007, 07:47 AM
tell me
all the things you
do, plumb me- to the depths
my sweet mary jane's are shinny
wear me

kborsden
01-24-2007, 01:44 AM
wear me
like a prada
bag or shoe, whatever
just put me on and hold me tight
always

Beyondian
01-24-2007, 04:36 AM
Always
The ultimate
Forever. Without end.
Eternity in a promise
A word

kborsden
01-24-2007, 04:56 AM
a word
in the silence
breaks the unuttered mood
flushing forth and a window's glass
shatters

Beyondian
01-24-2007, 05:14 AM
Shatters
In Unkindness
Cruelty spiking like glass
Transparent, sharp, lascerating
my soul

kborsden
01-24-2007, 05:24 AM
my soul
empties onto
the cold, hard wooden floor
I have slit my stomach open
for you

Beyondian
01-24-2007, 05:48 AM
For you
I race the sun
I catch the sunrise
I create a painting of gold
For you

kborsden
01-24-2007, 05:54 AM
for you
my day begins
for you I go to work
but drinking down the pub with mates
for me

Beyondian
01-24-2007, 05:57 AM
For me
Stars sing softly
Shadows dance in corners
Trees grow faces peeking through boughs
Chuckling

janetbellinger
01-24-2007, 06:04 AM
chuckling
rolling pin of fate
stops not long enough
for me to pop back up again
like the Pillsbury Dough Girl

kborsden
01-24-2007, 06:05 AM
chuckling
chubby cherubs
naked in the heavens
playing soft melodious sounds
that soothe

Beyondian
01-24-2007, 06:07 AM
that soothe
Strains of piano
keys touched softly in the
basement of a dusty house filled
with thoughts

kborsden
01-24-2007, 06:17 AM
with thought
for my brother
locked away like a beast
in a cage for his misdoing
prison

Beyondian
01-24-2007, 06:18 AM
Prison
Clanking into
My mind. The bars and chains
of expectations restrain me
captive

kborsden
01-24-2007, 06:20 AM
captive
inside the maze
the warren of the soul
betrayed by all I held dearest
captive

Beyondian
01-24-2007, 06:21 AM
Captive
to the yearning
of my soul, the darkness
that hides in the very core
of me

kborsden
01-24-2007, 06:23 AM
of me
there is no sign
no shining beacon bright
just a distant lurking shadow
of night

Beyondian
01-24-2007, 06:24 AM
of night
streetlamps glimmer
shadows skitter, feigning
unrest. People, half themselves walk
alone

kborsden
01-24-2007, 06:26 AM
alone
lost without you
finding solace in my
reputation and illgotten
riches

Beyondian
01-24-2007, 06:29 AM
Riches
glitter warmly
Around the creases at
the edges of your eyes, made by
laughter

Ganesha
01-24-2007, 08:25 AM
laughter
shakes me holy
like a muted swan-down
my feathers ruffled to the max
witless

kborsden
01-25-2007, 02:04 AM
witless
and muttering
obscenities, open
sounding to the air around him
loner

Ganesha
01-25-2007, 08:08 AM
loner
she couldn't get
a new car this time, so
the rental had to do, we got
to ride

kborsden
01-28-2007, 10:47 PM
to ride
the giant wave
that premordial wave
of fortunes rebuked through passion
wipe out!

Ganesha
01-29-2007, 08:58 AM
wipe out
my anger please
I'm so vulnerable
brittle emotion to the brink
wiped out

Beyondian
02-01-2007, 12:28 AM
Wiped out
so stretched, so
tired, so dulled. I'm tight and
cold inside. Longing for the peace
of rest

Ganesha
02-01-2007, 08:08 AM
of rest
I stretch out long
and languid I am a
vodka gimlet after a fight
sip me

Godfather
02-03-2007, 01:04 AM
sip me
a gust of wind,
throw me a thrill of life,
sing me a song aimed t'wards heaven
and smile

Ganesha
02-03-2007, 01:17 AM
and smile
turning all the
frownies upside, down we
go in and out how about this
still smile

Godfather
02-03-2007, 05:16 PM
still smile.
as the photos
make me smile, cry and laugh
the past looks so much better than
it was

Beyondian
02-05-2007, 02:29 AM
It was
that last moment
when everything came clear
The eleventh hour struck my heart
My soul

Ganesha
02-05-2007, 08:17 AM
My soul
golden quicksand
sink another lifetime,
hand stretched above cold rising tide
I am

MacAllister
02-05-2007, 08:30 AM
I am
wintergreen sparks
breath shining foggy cold
air, holding your hand wondering
so warm.






(God these are hard for us non poet types. :) )

P.H.Delarran
02-05-2007, 10:11 AM
so warm
like a cat's tongue
run across sunning fur
your compliments stroke my ego,
my heart

Ganesha
02-06-2007, 01:21 AM
my heart
warmed in this chill
dog licks hand till skin chaffs
touched, I wash saliva off, cat's
jealous

Godfather
02-06-2007, 11:44 PM
jealous
irritable
anything, who is he?
anything can turn me down, blue,
angry

Ganesha
02-13-2007, 06:32 AM
angry
his face blood-red
trembling voice shrieks loud
I hold your anger in my mind
regret

ddgryphon
02-13-2007, 01:12 PM
Regret
darkened corners
shadows on my face
hiding all my memories
of you

Ganesha
02-14-2007, 08:18 AM
of you
I was a part
for you were in my heart
with you life was good, you left me
without

MacAllister
02-20-2007, 02:22 PM
Without,
salt rain in dark
pooling, tossing light to
that incandescent limerence
within.

P.H.Delarran
02-22-2007, 12:26 PM
within
confined limits
bound by expectations
unspoken and unrealistic
we flail

Ganesha
02-24-2007, 12:41 AM
we flail
vigorously
thrashing on road's surface
black ice hidden, tires screeching
we rest

kborsden
02-24-2007, 04:11 AM
we rest
our weary heads
with just yet leery friends,
our goals blown away by the wind.
we wake

P.H.Delarran
02-25-2007, 12:47 PM
we wake
with vague fancies
enticing us back to
dark slumber, rationality
weakened

Ganesha
02-28-2007, 07:54 AM
weakened
our hands shaking
I drop the golden key
heaven fading with each exhale
hades

kborsden
03-01-2007, 03:41 AM
hades,
the pit of hell,
a gate open to me,
dare I venture inside to peek
at you

Ganesha
03-01-2007, 10:30 AM
at you
lightening has struck
I hold your trembling hand
sulfur stink lingers as I kiss
your cheek

P.H.Delarran
03-01-2007, 11:22 AM
your cheek
glows hot with shame
as your actions stifle
good intentions, apology
denied

kborsden
03-02-2007, 04:27 PM
denied
entrance to the
hallowed gates of Eden.
thrust out into the cold milieu.
this life

Ganesha
03-03-2007, 02:51 AM
this life
Lullaby babe
Into windy trees tops
Fragile soft spot is rocking
Eve night

kborsden
03-03-2007, 03:17 AM
Eve night
and morning dew
opening moments, lust
for better days and evenings,
soft sleep

ddgryphon
03-03-2007, 10:19 AM
soft sleep
so far away,
yet still so near me lies.
I can not steal it from the night:
arise

kborsden
03-06-2007, 03:10 AM
Arise
River flowing
In crystal dew drops of
Silver strands, Aquarian blue,
Elm seeds

Beyondian
03-06-2007, 03:46 AM
Elm seeds
A palmful of
growth, possibilities
Spring encased in brown shells, ready
to rise

ddgryphon
03-06-2007, 06:00 AM
To rise
into beauty
possessed by raw sunlight
shining forth from eternal sky
above

kborsden
03-06-2007, 06:07 AM
above,
circling vultures,
carrion bird vampires,
skeletal remains of myself
below.

Ganesha
03-06-2007, 06:18 AM
below
belly button
savage hair clusters, hide
the porthole into this lifetime
rebirth

kborsden
03-06-2007, 06:26 AM
rebirth,
evanescent,
succumbs embryonic.
a new wish, wish for a release,
cancelled.

Ganesha
03-06-2007, 07:17 AM
cancelled
first light chanting
a rebirth each moment
cancelled with a resounding no
I bow

kborsden
03-06-2007, 07:23 AM
I bow
Am submissive
To my great overlord,
He beats me with taught leather whips,
Master

Beyondian
03-06-2007, 07:35 AM
Master
Subserviant
Eyes follow in worship
Mute mouths forming soundless chanting
Their Idol

kborsden
03-06-2007, 07:45 AM
idol
of clay and stone,
pallid bust by Paris,
he fell in love with you and your
magic

Beyondian
03-06-2007, 07:49 AM
Magic
Masterfully
Manipulating the mob
Mixing showmanship with myst'ry
Marvel

kborsden
03-06-2007, 07:53 AM
Marvel
This man at math,
Have awe in his grand form,
Great economic formulas,
His mind

Godfather
03-06-2007, 07:24 PM
his mind -
shotgun dumpster
muse buried under 12
tonnes of crap. a shame, tragedy
a fool

kborsden
03-19-2007, 07:49 AM
a fool,
tragic jester,
grinning skull of folly,
childish, infantile purity
unripe

P.H.Delarran
03-19-2007, 10:56 AM
unripe
and green, like morn's
dew swollen grass, you cling
wrapped around my ankles; I can't
shake you

kborsden
03-21-2007, 03:01 AM
Shake you,
Vacillating,
Trembling flesh and tissues,
You do not wake from your ceaseless
Slumber.

Ganesha
03-21-2007, 07:31 AM
Slumber
sleep of the dead
I, wide eyed lie, waiting
moisture pools in body hollows
Waking

ddgryphon
03-21-2007, 09:40 PM
Waking
with you beside
I am complete and whole
grateful for these years we have shared
as one

Ganesha
03-22-2007, 08:30 AM
as one
we two, become
twenty years of loving
lust took a back-seat-steamed windows
au vu

Silkysun
03-31-2007, 05:13 AM
au vu
a déjà vu
mechanized future sights
and newly born brain cells that die
again

kborsden
03-31-2007, 05:43 AM
again
once more, again
damned to repeat mistakes
doomed to never learning to change
a thing

ddgryphon
03-31-2007, 11:53 AM
a thing
once thought precious
carelessly tossed aside
left to unkind weather, where rot
consumes

Godfather
04-07-2007, 02:30 PM
consumes
girls in costumes
spits out spring poetry
butterfly hats and sing alongs
wry grin

ddgryphon
04-07-2007, 08:33 PM
wry grin
into sweet smile
you are slow smokey jazz
cool night of improvisation
sing me

kborsden
04-08-2007, 02:48 AM
sing me
hymns of today,
speak prayers of yesterday
and utter psalms of tomorrow
waiting

Godfather
04-08-2007, 02:38 PM
waiting
with heavy feet,
singing two line songs
wailin my harmonica. here's
the train

ddgryphon
04-08-2007, 03:34 PM
the train
ain't gonna run
no more down this here line
the bo's gotta travel elseways
t'other

Godfather
04-08-2007, 04:06 PM
t'other
with my brother
singin', howlin' the blues
we roll on down the line, feel fine,
feel blue

kborsden
04-12-2007, 08:27 PM
feel blue,
cold as the sky,
frozen droplets of rain
within my still unbeating heart,
rain pipe

Godfather
04-12-2007, 09:35 PM
rain pipe
dripping dreams,
14 forgotten types,
strong, fragile, torn at the seam,
lost dreams.

Godfather
05-02-2007, 01:16 PM
lost dreams,
but nothing is
lost. paris, smothered in
worn out descriptions of love, and
comfort.

Symphony
06-07-2007, 03:28 AM
Comfort,
choc'late heaven
or a baked potato,
soul food, sold food, priceless as
friendship

ddgryphon
06-07-2007, 08:39 AM
friendship
timeless comfort
each knowing shared secrets
knowing they will be together
til death

Meerkat
07-03-2007, 06:34 PM
hard won
that ashy ground
unwanted barren rock
contest violent as sulpher
Iwo

Godfather
07-03-2007, 07:54 PM
ignore this one, i don't know what Iwo means.

til death,
martyrdom. hands
rooted with strength, dirt, veins,
muscle - fists shaking, clenching. sweat.
she's gone.

ddgryphon
07-04-2007, 02:13 PM
she's gone
into darkness
into some forgotten time
unreachable, she has taken
my world

Godfather
07-04-2007, 03:46 PM
my world
my words, drawings,
my muscles, coat, my shoes.
i want her to want them, she can
have me.

Ganesha
07-05-2007, 12:03 AM
Have me
dressed or naked
rubbed with herbs and lemon
rolled in crumbs and baked all night long
eat me

Godfather
08-12-2007, 09:05 PM
eat me
unsalted, drink
the blues dripping from me
in draughts that howl i'm human, drink
my blues

P.H.Delarran
08-12-2007, 09:54 PM
my blues
words unwritten
dreamlike melodies float
without harmony across the
dark night

laurel29
08-14-2007, 05:59 AM
Dark Night,
moonless indeed.
Bereft of my comfort
I seek solace between his thighs…
not yours.

Godfather
08-26-2007, 01:55 PM
not yours
but hers, and hers.
not yours, but that beauty's
and hers and hers, not yours sissy,
but hers

P.H.Delarran
08-28-2007, 10:44 AM
but hers
lingers, jagged
claws scratching her shoulders-
gripping her throat; soundless pangs of
sorrow

CurtisPutnam
08-30-2007, 10:10 AM
Sorrow
Disgust remains
Maggot socket secret
Blemish fostered in false domain
Life’s shame

poetinahat
08-30-2007, 12:46 PM
Life's shame
electric lights
in crystal chandeliers
plastic carpet on marble floors
billboards

Godfather
09-08-2007, 01:42 AM
billboards
aesthetic breasts
jeans for sale. dreams for sale
airbrushed woman and airbrushed love
just lust

Jayne
09-24-2007, 08:42 PM
just lust
ever flows, a
renewable resource,
more cost-effective than propane
to burn.

CurtisPutnam
10-27-2007, 06:42 AM
to burn
with gift of Life
dancing butterflies soar
against clouds near rain, in your heart
soul leaps

onestepp
11-04-2007, 01:26 AM
Soul leaps

High notes explode

Waterfalls tumble, turn

Down dark, dank, ancient carved tunnels

Ying-yang

Theo Landreville
11-06-2007, 02:47 AM
"Ying-Yang"
What did you say
Was i speaking in tongue
Echoes off the wall cloud your thoughts
Too bad

Godfather
11-07-2007, 02:13 AM
too bad,
she's too good. that
girl, which one, beautiful.
i just don't know what to do with
myself.

ddgryphon
11-07-2007, 06:44 AM
Myself,
I must wonder;
desperate I must beg
a soft glance, or some muttered words
from you.

Ganesha
11-07-2007, 06:53 AM
from you
I hold the seed
within me grows the babe
without us future has no hold
love me

poetinahat
11-07-2007, 07:09 AM
love me
tether my eyes
not windows but anchors
in a maelstrom of sinking souls
love you

Ganesha
11-07-2007, 08:13 AM
love you
and I have so
my heart swells into you
we are two and then we are one
I you

ddgryphon
11-08-2007, 06:24 AM
I you
at such distance
the taste is aftertaste,
lingering far into the night;
we dream.

onestepp
11-09-2007, 09:32 AM
We dream
awake at night
remembering life's past
climbing every treacherous vine,
let's dance

ddgryphon
11-09-2007, 10:50 AM
Let's dance,
shake and shimmy,
catch that beat booming by;
don't know if we can do it till
we try.

susanabra
11-09-2007, 02:47 PM
we try
until trying
becomes monotonous
becomes failure disguised within
begin

onestepp
11-15-2007, 01:45 AM
Begin
ideas ignite
wrinkling, crackling,
animating mental powers
afire

onestepp
12-03-2007, 08:34 AM
Afire
barrier reef
evergrowing, groaning
cagey colorful cut corals
oceans

wyzguy
12-05-2007, 03:32 PM
oceans
deeply surging
over shoals of never was
drowning useless remnants of my
emotions

onestepp
12-11-2007, 09:00 AM
Emotions
inner turmoil
turning, churning, yearning
unforgiveable yesterdays
headache

onestepp
12-11-2007, 09:06 AM
headache
stabbing, throbbing,
pinpricking razor sharp,
unyielding mystical darkness
heartache.

onestepp
01-03-2008, 09:51 AM
heartache
dripping, dribbling
gooey, gummy, mushy
stickey-ickey chocolate goo,
ice-cream

P.H.Delarran
01-04-2008, 12:27 PM
ice-cream
just one dribble
onto my waiting tongue
no point resisting, tomorrow
diet

onestepp
01-12-2008, 07:28 AM
Diet,
counting, watching
beautifying, spacious,
feet lightly bouncing off the ground,
weightless.

Writer???
01-12-2008, 08:46 AM
Weightless
We float aloft
Noting worlds of pleasure
Treasure waiting within a touch
Caress

CurtisPutnam
01-13-2008, 05:07 AM
caress
finger linger
drawn out, curved in, stopped dead
apex of disire, near the mount, resists
release

Writer???
01-13-2008, 12:28 PM
release
whatever ties
your heart to hatred's hell
resolve to evolve into a
new you

onestepp
01-14-2008, 01:33 AM
New you
running, tuning,
speedily juggling
heart, mind, soul, exploding within
birthday

P.H.Delarran
01-14-2008, 01:45 AM
birthday
thirteen candles
drama queens and punk smiles
sugar energy three a.m
passage

Writer???
01-14-2008, 10:53 AM
Passage
made to places
with faces needing eyes
to see them not as empty stares -
human.

Albedo of Zero
01-14-2008, 11:34 PM
Human
or not to be
a fur-wet animal
eating crow for nutritional
values

Writer???
01-16-2008, 09:03 AM
Values
Lost or changing
Rearranging faces
Building bust and tucking tummies
Lying lips

onestepp
01-20-2008, 11:45 PM
lying lips
run, trip, skip, fly
ruby-red scarlet sped
vermillion catches upon tales
poker

onestepp
01-26-2008, 12:21 AM
Poker
grave, staid
colorless, serious
monotonous impersonal
joker

onestepp
02-02-2008, 07:31 AM
Joker
jive, jest
light-hearted, foot-stomping
merrymaking comedian
quipster

ddgryphon
02-03-2008, 07:31 AM
Quipster.
sharp tongued
flinging barbs at easy
prey; left open for dry,painful
put downs.

Writer???
02-03-2008, 10:25 AM
put downs
petty people
pumping puny dura
putting people in their places
pleases

P.H.Delarran
02-05-2008, 11:26 AM
pleases
thank yous
pronounced with reluctance
taught by those willing to demand
respect

Paint
02-07-2008, 01:55 AM
respect
shown by skint fist
and pointed smoking gun,
unlike sweetest forgiven love...
real time.

Writer???
02-07-2008, 03:41 PM
real time
does not exist
someone somewhere some say
stuck a stick in the ground and said
"Tick-tock"

onestepp
02-13-2008, 08:44 AM
Tick Tock
dinging, gonging
ear-splitting, thunderous
spectacular special effects
cuckoo

Godfather
02-17-2008, 07:04 PM
cuckoo
don't wake me up
wake me up, don't wake me.
i watch the world through .com - please
wake me.

P.H.Delarran
02-17-2008, 07:30 PM
wake me
entice me please
drench my weary senses
rescue me from night's redundance
wake me

oneblindmouse
02-17-2008, 10:49 PM
wake me
greet me gently
with the smile I miss most
bring me a reason to open
my eyes

Godfather
02-18-2008, 03:49 AM
my eyes
are quiet. they
brood. silently strophing.
hands move, deliberately, when
you talk.

oneblindmouse
02-18-2008, 12:40 PM
you talk
sculpting the space
between us, works of art
that hover motionless, your words
breathe life

onestepp
02-22-2008, 12:06 AM
Breathe life
thump, bump
quietly, speedily
new budding friendships develop
silent spring

Woof
02-22-2008, 01:24 AM
silent spring,
metal coiled beneath
my bed lurking,
poised to whine
at an inconvenient time,
my luck.

onestepp
02-23-2008, 05:26 AM
My luck
trips, skips,
super, dainty-delights,
everlasting bright pastels
rainbows

Writer???
02-24-2008, 03:43 AM
rainbows
follow certain
rules and so does this game
we seem to be getting away
from that. :D

2
4
6
8
2

Ganesha
02-24-2008, 03:55 AM
from that.
I have learned this,
that my this is so that
yet why am I so 'this or that'
from this?

Woof
02-24-2008, 07:50 PM
from this
a fresh blank slate,
to play some nonsense, or
wrinkle the forehead and write deep
then sleep.

oneblindmouse
02-24-2008, 10:44 PM
then sleep
wipes out the pain,
wipes blank the aching slate,
replacing memories with dreams
all new

Woof
02-26-2008, 12:09 AM
all new
and improved poem,
guaranteed to inspire
and to please or your money back
call now

Writer???
02-26-2008, 01:55 AM
call now
inspiration,
we are waiting for you
where are the lines oh muse, the words?
help me

Woof
02-26-2008, 07:22 PM
help me
to hear your voice
while perched on my shoulder
you whisper invisible words
in verse

oneblindmouse
02-26-2008, 07:54 PM
in verse
we scribble down
the first words that appear
or sift and sort until we find
the best

Woof
02-27-2008, 06:13 PM
the best
writing perhaps
starts as a gift unplanned,
finished as effort overwrought
yet flawed

onestepp
02-28-2008, 01:48 AM
Yet flawed
flitted, glistened
enormous energy
unknown blindness touches rough stones
gemstone

oneblindmouse
02-28-2008, 03:03 PM
gemstone
I, too, am flawed
cracked and cloudy with age
ruby heart beating in cold rock
your fist

Woof
03-01-2008, 07:03 PM
your fist
bangs on table,
out of rage, is it now,
or will your clenched hand open to
beg love?

oneblindmouse
03-02-2008, 05:20 PM
beg love
no more, I swore
never again to ask
for what I am entitled to
by right

onestepp
03-03-2008, 09:00 AM
by right,
marching, turning,
high-stepping energy,
wonderous whisteria wins
on left

oneblindmouse
03-07-2008, 12:02 AM
on left
an easy choice
on right, a narrow path
through twisted growth of jungle dark
with fear

Kurlumbenus
03-08-2008, 01:21 AM
With fear
tread tiny feet
right behind your mind's eye
getting ready to swarm over
your tongue.

onestepp
03-08-2008, 08:06 AM
your tonque
ruby-red sped
thumpity scarlet bled
fushia, vermillion upended
bad splice

onestepp
03-16-2008, 06:16 AM
bad splice
splits, twists, turns, pops
super spiraling kinks
magnifying broken art
pictures

oneblindmouse
03-16-2008, 08:29 PM
pictures
fractions of sight
two-dimensioned splinters
one-sided view of what you see
not me

Woof
03-19-2008, 06:58 PM
not me
but the shadow
walks without identity,
shape-shifting roles to fit the mood
unseen

oneblindmouse
03-19-2008, 10:10 PM
unseen
I ebb and flow
my silent raging tides
ignored like so much flotsam you
discard

HeronW
03-20-2008, 02:56 AM
discard
disowned and lost
it shivers in the darkness
waiting for arms to reach out then
drink deep

oneblindmouse
03-20-2008, 12:59 PM
drink deep
this hemlock cup
brings welcome peace at last
as you shake off the mortal coil
you hate

Woof
03-20-2008, 06:40 PM
you hate
the thing that prods
your heart to bitter passion
for nothing is despised that is
not felt

onestepp
03-23-2008, 12:42 AM
not felt
building, budding
enormous energy
potent proud pounded paradox
atoms

onestepp
03-25-2008, 08:24 AM
atoms
bouncing, bounding
enormous energy
microscopic forceful ions
charges

onestepp
04-03-2008, 04:54 AM
Hard won
fading, bumping
secretly, stately pink
metucously unperfect
friendship