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onestepp
04-16-2008, 05:48 AM
friendship
caring, sharing
large-hearted, sure-footed,
smart trustworthy adventurer
loyal
onestepp
04-26-2008, 11:05 AM
Loyal
treking, trusting
delightfully joyous
universally logical
planets
oneblindmouse
04-28-2008, 01:18 AM
Planets
hurtle through space,
endlessly orbiting
what they cannot free themselves from,
like us.
like us
stars lose their way
but even in darkness
they never stop shining, burning
living.
onestepp
05-02-2008, 05:32 AM
Living
trembling, springing
tumultuous delight
forever churning own footsteps
relax
oneblindmouse
05-02-2008, 04:10 PM
relax
just take my hand
see shooting stars that climb
to dizzy heights in brand new skies
and smile
onestepp
05-09-2008, 05:27 AM
and smile
wide crooked grin
delightful happiness
childhood memories recounted
wider
Meerkat
05-09-2008, 06:48 AM
wider
we mind the game
of one splitting, two play
forgetful that its start was fun
for one
Beyondian
05-09-2008, 10:04 AM
for one,
the world might stop
The sea might calm, and the
Sun might shine - just once more through the
storm clouds
oneblindmouse
05-09-2008, 12:28 PM
storm clouds
approach again
with black and icy rain
words thunder down and find their mark -
I flee
onestepp
05-14-2008, 08:00 AM
I flee
bounce, spring, zag, leap
torquoise, turtle shell white,
blindly, perfectly carry home
sandals
Beyondian
05-15-2008, 04:54 PM
Sandals
Casting sand plumes
through the beaches of life
My Footprints dancing with the waves
Freely
Writer???
05-20-2008, 04:30 AM
Freely
we come and give
and live in ever more
expanding bounds of connection;
unreal.
onestepp
05-25-2008, 10:44 AM
Unreal
flounder,blunder
happy, jolly, delight
one mistaken identity
fishing
oneblindmouse
05-26-2008, 11:36 PM
fishing
for compliments
craving pats on the back
the child within, forever sad
unloved
Ganesha
05-27-2008, 03:51 AM
unloved
years of rejecting
futile attempts to give
what I craved the most, now I am
open
Beyondian
05-27-2008, 12:06 PM
open
trying to see
reasons to continue
in the promise of affection
you show
poetinahat
05-27-2008, 12:55 PM
you show
a visitor
the view from your window
you leave him there, shutting the door
behind
Writer???
05-28-2008, 02:04 AM
Behind
the sadness and
tears, the hopes and gladness,
moments of madness ironic
to Love
Beyondian
05-28-2008, 03:25 AM
to love
If I could dare
Letting myself extend
my hand, my heart, my everything
to you
onestepp
06-20-2008, 09:52 AM
To you
yearning, learning
delightfully bright-eyed
questioning everything always
Teacher
Teena
06-30-2008, 04:15 AM
teacher
comrade at arms
protecting freedom's goal
in far off lands for people most
unknown
Beyondian
07-01-2008, 05:17 AM
Unknown
In his lonely
Wistful wanderings of
Wonder, he casts a glassy eye
At life
onestepp
07-02-2008, 05:34 AM
At life
action, listen
inspiring, perspiring
one giant step leads direction
east wind
Beyondian
07-04-2008, 04:36 AM
east wind
caresses my face
blows in my footsteps and
whispers the song of the world in
my heart
Feiss
07-20-2008, 06:47 PM
My heart
will go on and
love a dozen other men
Ha! Lied when I said I'd never
Let go
Beyondian
07-21-2008, 05:10 PM
Let go
The river sings
Of life and beatiful
moments beyond the riverbank
Dabble
dabble
in the sunlit
moments of joyous smiles
and splash the water of life on
your face
Teena
07-22-2008, 09:06 AM
your face
so familiar
and yet no longer known
images of your face near hers
cheating
Feiss
07-22-2008, 12:49 PM
cheating
girlfriends are sluts
cheating boyfriends are studs
only solution is orgy
porgy
Teena
07-24-2008, 02:52 AM
Porgy
and Bess - classic
but not my preference
Phantom of the Opera is
premier
Feiss
07-24-2008, 03:30 AM
Premier
Wen Jia Bao is
halting cars and traffic
to up air freshness for 08
smog games
Teena
07-28-2008, 03:33 AM
smog games
L. A. basin
difficult to run when
breath rushes out but seeps back in
slowly
Beyondian
07-28-2008, 11:52 AM
slowly
dangling from the
ceiling of the world, I
float in the wind - alone, serene
blissful
Ganesha
07-29-2008, 07:32 AM
blissful
I am falling
hard upon your high-heels
it feels like hell's fires burning
sulfur
Beyondian
07-29-2008, 05:24 PM
sulfur
in my boiling
veins, I rise on desire
longing for the cooling grace of
your lips
onestepp
08-01-2008, 08:00 AM
your lips
cracked, chapped, crinkled
firey-red happy
creative musical genius
trumpet
Beyondian
08-04-2008, 05:23 PM
trumpet
the world's darkness
In your dulcet whispers
all I hear is you - your sweetness
I drown
Teena
08-04-2008, 10:20 PM
i drown
in the raucous
cawing cacophony
of endless politicians and
their lies
Beyondian
08-09-2008, 05:14 PM
Their lies
don't believe the
whispers and promises
of my eyes, my lips, my fingers
they lie
onestepp
08-15-2008, 07:33 AM
They lie
sleeping, weeping
dainty, decorative leaden
declarative dreams overflow,
pencils
Teena
08-18-2008, 07:38 AM
pencils
break easily
like promises and hearts
a dime a dozen like your words
untrue
onestepp
08-31-2008, 07:35 AM
untrue
growling, groaning
large melodramatic
neverending eating machine
stomach
Ganesha
09-01-2008, 07:20 AM
stomach
tentatively holds
the truth of my spirit
winged creatures call me on home
I fly
Eliel Takavian
09-04-2008, 11:28 PM
I fly
hover over
harrier is my name
I stoop above the spinning earth
and fall
onestepp
09-11-2008, 06:58 AM
And fall
winking, blinking
wiggily, jiggily
large scarey, starry-eyed monster
slumber.
oneblindmouse
09-11-2008, 05:36 PM
Slumber
blanketing dreams
seeping through lazy pores
pillowing him who tranquil snores
at peace
Lady Cat
09-11-2008, 11:09 PM
At peace
the last respite
dark visions permeate
chaotic thoughts wafting away
good bye
Teena
09-13-2008, 12:07 AM
good bye
you say to me
but there is nothing good
about tearing two lives apart
like this
onestepp
09-17-2008, 12:34 AM
like this
tieing, trying
thin, long, strong, delicate
blindness simplified construction
laces
onestepp
09-30-2008, 06:46 AM
laces
tugging, pulling
long, thick, strong, colorful,
under, over through white canvas
stitches
onestepp
10-10-2008, 07:27 AM
stitches
braided, plaited,
delightful delicate
doodled designs, double life,
artist
onestepp
11-10-2008, 09:50 AM
artist
mixed, stirred
great musical whimsy
unforgetable icons flew
Disney
ddgryphon
12-05-2008, 07:16 AM
Disney
dreamed new visions:
brought worlds unseen to life.
creating the impossible:
his gift.
Teena
12-06-2008, 08:46 AM
his gift
faith, hope and love
redemption from all sin
futures beyond infinity
the Christ
oneblindmouse
01-03-2009, 11:39 PM
the Christ
would surely gasp
at what his church has done
with all his words of love and peace,
not war
Ganesha
01-04-2009, 07:42 AM
not war
they had pleaded
yet the bombs fell all night
killing men, women and children
peace out
P.H.Delarran
01-05-2009, 01:42 AM
peace out
smoke chokes reason
clouds of grief, rage, blind sight
this path written in history,
in blood
Meerkat
01-05-2009, 03:41 AM
in blood
free rides the line
the code of clan and face
the heritage of luck and time
unearned
P.H.Delarran
01-05-2009, 10:07 AM
unearned
your affection
tantalizes my will
as if I never had control
love lust
Fiat Lex
01-19-2009, 11:09 PM
love lust?
the rush of need?
crave it, trip on any
rounded object. fall flat, and don't
get up.
onestepp
01-21-2009, 01:22 AM
Get up
scramble, scamper,
small, delightful, quick, joy,
greying wings beneath own soul,
fleetness
Fiat Lex
01-23-2009, 07:15 AM
"Fleetness,"
proclaimed the mouse,
"is all--swift feet, long life."
"Not so," grinned the cat. "Wait,
stalk patiently, and your belly will
be full."
onestepp
01-31-2009, 10:04 PM
Be full
scatter, gather,
januty outrageous joy,
expertise baffled genius
Mindless
ddgryphon
02-01-2009, 01:49 AM
mindless
fingers tapping
rhythmic pounding sounding
around this dull forgotten room
waiting
kborsden
04-20-2011, 12:23 PM
waiting
on the doorstep
the rain soaking my bones
the cold a constant companion
HELLO!
HELLO!
Old friends greeting
smiles all round for those there
the absentees are mourned with tears
and wine
kborsden
04-28-2011, 04:15 AM
and wine
flows as water -
a torrent of constant
cheer - or fanciful forced antics
plain pissed
onestepp
05-03-2011, 04:44 AM
Plain pissed
mad, not glad, ired
irritable fury
passionate quick tempered anger
enraged.
Ganesha
05-15-2011, 09:20 PM
enraged.
hot with passion
we engage our quick wits
tango embraced our bodies twist
we dance
Colin Fiat
05-15-2011, 09:31 PM
we dance
around subjects
we can't agree upon
forcing on our quiet face for
breakfast
Blarg
05-15-2011, 11:49 PM
breakfast
of champions
this shocking morning sun
that shakes me into my sneakers
to run
JohnL
05-16-2011, 01:23 AM
To run
outside in May
under cellophane skies
beats June’s mosquito bite
saloon.
Ganesha
05-16-2011, 03:56 AM
saloon
the doors swinging
guns on our hips do sway
we aim and shoot, fast but furious
we miss
Colin Fiat
05-16-2011, 10:05 AM
We miss
Midnight romance
When loves noise filled the air
Fine memories held dear now we
Grow old
Blarg
05-16-2011, 10:39 AM
Grow old
with me, my love,
our ripe stinky cheeses
fermenting into something worth
slicing
Colin Fiat
05-17-2011, 07:53 AM
Slicing
At my good name
With cutting sharp tongue wit?
Lets settle this like gentlemen
At dawn!
CDSinex
05-19-2011, 02:51 AM
At dawn
you rise and pick
your clothes up off my floor.
Without a word I watch you dress
and leave.
Ganesha
05-19-2011, 07:28 AM
and leave
me awakened
to your crime committed
sugar in the gas breaks my car
karma
JohnL
05-23-2011, 09:12 AM
Karma
is lazier
than most people know – it
waits for the moment when push comes
to shove.
kborsden
05-25-2011, 03:12 AM
to shove
the door open
and then not pass through it
a closer inspection reveals
"please pull"
Blarg
05-25-2011, 04:32 AM
"Please pull,"
she told Cary,
"harder, forget about
your Mount Rushmore face for just a
moment."
CDSinex
05-26-2011, 04:53 AM
Moment
after moment
we lie awake and talk
as if to hold the dawn at bay
once more
Ganesha
05-27-2011, 03:38 AM
once more
I pry the jaws
of time open to now
then they snap shut swallowing me
again
CDSinex
06-12-2011, 12:04 AM
Again
it’s time for you
to go and me to stay
behind. A fate we each choose for
our selves.
Ganesha
06-12-2011, 03:19 AM
our selves
a pack of lies
that tries to ignore me
I am the one who is the all
nothing
CDSinex
06-17-2011, 06:32 AM
Nothing
left between us.
The bridge and road are out.
Storms took the last link and now there’s
nothing
Ganesha
07-03-2011, 02:16 AM
nothing
contains it all
love can hold everything
a rainbow bridge from me to you
dear heart
B.D. Eyeslie
07-14-2011, 05:33 AM
dear heart
do you hear me
when I cry to myself
will you pump one last pint of hope
purpose
kdnxdr
07-15-2011, 08:42 AM
purpose -
gleaned from live's lived
molded to serve others
as an expression of God's love,
it's free!
CDSinex
07-18-2011, 01:23 AM
It's free
you needn’t ask.
There are no strings, just this
one question. What will you want for
breakfast?
wyzguy
07-18-2011, 02:21 AM
Breakfast?
No, I must go
To the one who can't know
About what happened after the show.
Fast break
DionS.
07-19-2011, 03:38 AM
Fast break,
Next to slow work,
Is the only true sin
For which there needn’t ever be
A cause.
kdnxdr
07-19-2011, 09:16 AM
a cause,
a grand escape
to higher purposes
beyond the nothingness of life;
who cares?
celestialwolf
07-21-2011, 01:51 AM
Who cares?
I thought I did,
Maybe I could be wrong,
They say you only live once right?
Screw this.
kdnxdr
07-21-2011, 08:15 AM
screw this:
twist it just right
where it is nice and tight,
screw it in through the long, hot night;
you're done
B.D. Eyeslie
07-23-2011, 12:46 AM
You're done?
as quick as that?
I'm still kind of ... undone.
I said it was a marathon.
You sprint.
kdnxdr
07-25-2011, 02:27 AM
you sprint,
hoping to win
knowing not what your prize
could have been; when you take your time,
it's sweet
celestialwolf
07-25-2011, 06:05 PM
It's sweet,
That georgia peach,
Such tender flesh to taste,
Juices runnings down my chin,
Yummy.
onestepp
07-26-2011, 06:08 AM
Yummy
sweet, chocolate
velvety, heavenly
fluffy as a white puffy cloud
heaven
kdnxdr
07-26-2011, 10:23 AM
heaven
peaks through the clouds
reminding me, there's more -
like a parallel dimension
beyond
LizaJane
07-26-2011, 01:07 PM
beyond
the melting ice
and the amber liquid
dreams shatter like glass upon the
sidewalk
celestialwolf
07-26-2011, 11:06 PM
Sidewalk,
Sizzling and gray,
Radiating heat waves,
Melting shoes and burning bare feet,
Scalding.
LizaJane
07-26-2011, 11:19 PM
scalding
embarrassment
makes my face blush crimson
like a rose in a scorching sun
wilted
Perscribo
07-26-2011, 11:32 PM
Wilted
by the blank light
of cold, fluorescent tubes,
I climb down this thin ladder to
reboot.
LizaJane
07-27-2011, 06:52 AM
reboot
this haggard soul
to the days of my youth
choices hung like grapes on the vine
dripping
CDSinex
07-28-2011, 02:02 AM
Dripping
wet your hair falls
on one breast. You lean and
softly say, We shouldn’t be here.
I know.
JohnL
07-28-2011, 02:42 AM
I know
nothing of plants
beyond famous flowers
and yet I bask in their morning
glories.
LizaJane
07-28-2011, 07:30 AM
glories
tattered flags flown
victories heralded
heroes remembered in solemn
sweet prayers
note: had to add sweet 'cause prayer was only one syllable - sigh
Ganesha
07-28-2011, 08:00 AM
sweet prayers
we had whispered
I raised my voice to God
your inner silence was broken
be still
celestialwolf
07-30-2011, 01:53 AM
Be still,
I know it hurts,
It'll be over soon,
He whimpers as I pull it out,
A thorn.
B.D. Eyeslie
07-30-2011, 02:24 AM
A thorn
Beneath the rose
Paints the red on my lips
Moon set sun rise it's time to fly
Victim
LizaJane
07-31-2011, 03:12 AM
victim
shivers in shame
self recrimination
ravaging unmercifully
its prey
celestialwolf
07-31-2011, 07:37 PM
Its prey,
Now within view,
In an open clearing,
A hawk swoops down with claws ready,
Attack.
B.D. Eyeslie
07-31-2011, 09:50 PM
Attack
The poor rise up
Power to the people
The ruling classes pay the price
Theater
CDSinex
08-01-2011, 04:45 AM
Theater
of the absurd.
Dancing in denial
our words cannot break the silence,
for now
kdnxdr
08-01-2011, 07:24 PM
for now
distance will do
waiting for time's quick wink
when our stars form their alliance
we'll know
celestialwolf
08-01-2011, 07:50 PM
We'll know,
When the time’s right,
To face our destiny,
It matters not if we survive,
Forward.
kdnxdr
08-02-2011, 12:12 PM
forward
into the breach
whether we die or not
only to fight for our freedom
we win
B.D. Eyeslie
08-02-2011, 05:05 PM
we win
though there is loss
arms held high in glory
over the bodies of our friends
glory
Ciggie Moondust
08-05-2011, 03:15 AM
glory
interlude of
tintinnabulation
impending knell, unfurling knoll
lie still
celestialwolf
08-06-2011, 09:23 AM
Lie still
I want to see
Just how deep the blade goes
Before your flesh looses color
Murder.
LizaJane
08-06-2011, 10:54 AM
murder
of reasoning
time crumbles foundations
chaos reigns in a hollow land
too late
B.D. Eyeslie
08-06-2011, 06:58 PM
too late
the golden gate
transcontinental crush
text the words speak the words--no more
burning
Ciggie Moondust
08-07-2011, 03:57 AM
burning
interstitial
a flame, then whoosh - wisp of
whispering pearl skeletons un-
rattled
celestialwolf
08-07-2011, 08:02 PM
Rattled
My poor raw nerves
To the point where I shake
I desperately need to calm
Stressed out.
B.D. Eyeslie
08-08-2011, 10:40 PM
Stressed out?
I've felt better.
You can't burn at both ends
And call yourself acquiescent.
Go forth.
Ciggie Moondust
08-11-2011, 03:30 AM
Go forth
into traffic
I won't put out a hand
nor will I pound any pavements
searching.
kdnxdr
08-11-2011, 11:39 AM
searching
frantic for vowels
struggling to build a word
the consonants seem so alone
don't text
celestialwolf
08-11-2011, 07:26 PM
Don’t text,
Behind the wheel,
Because you may not see,
The vehicle before you stopped,
Break lights.
B.D. Eyeslie
08-12-2011, 06:13 AM
Break lights,
Plate glass showers,
The shopkeeper turns red.
The young and the pissed all want more.
More blood.
kdnxdr
08-12-2011, 07:52 AM
more blood
never enough
nothing satisfies hate;
when will this killing ever end?
not soon
celestialwolf
08-13-2011, 12:11 AM
Not soon,
Not even close,
Oh how I wish it was,
Please hurry up and get here soon,
Lunch time.
Ciggie Moondust
08-13-2011, 07:06 AM
'Lunch time'
says the werewolf
all the while wondering
why he prowls at unwolfly hours,
dammit.
B.D. Eyeslie
08-13-2011, 07:32 PM
Damnit
I say to you
the horse you rode on too.
If I can't get my due, I'm through.
Hear me!
Ciggie Moondust
08-14-2011, 01:53 AM
Hear me!
Fear me! Beer me!
Need to get a buzz on
before the damned zombies pillage
this town.
B.D. Eyeslie
08-14-2011, 09:22 AM
this town ...
I love this town;
it's where I hang my hat.
But now, with zombies everywhere,
Not so.
celestialwolf
08-14-2011, 07:09 PM
Not so.
I’m serious.
Are you questioning me?
Feel free to go and look it up.
I’m right.
CDSinex
08-15-2011, 02:17 AM
"I'm right,"
you like to say,
as if you thought I cared.
Lost in thought, "sorry, did you say
something?"
B.D. Eyeslie
08-15-2011, 05:02 AM
something
is not nothing
and nothing is no fun
something worth noting compels me
to think
Ciggie Moondust
08-15-2011, 05:57 AM
to think
bloodily so
till your musings transform
into some semblance of knowledge
blood clots
CDSinex
08-16-2011, 03:44 AM
Uh-oh. Somebody’s having a 1960s hippie flashback.
Blood clots
on a fresh wound.
Absorbed in blue flowers
the energy of the cosmos:
Selfheal
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Perscribo
08-16-2011, 07:19 PM
Self-heal
seeped in large heaps
helps pressured hearts increase
seconds and sand between loud beats
for sleep.
Ciggie Moondust
08-17-2011, 03:25 AM
for sleep
long awaited
micronaps tide over
until fierce undertow drags you
down, down.
celestialwolf
08-17-2011, 07:20 AM
Down, Down,
Into the well,
Tumbling ever faster,
Till at last it hits the bottom,
A wish.
LizaJane
08-17-2011, 11:26 PM
a wish
blown by the wind
like a dandelion
lost among the tangles and thorns
choked out
B.D. Eyeslie
08-17-2011, 11:36 PM
choked out
pungent hazmat
a doobie by the door
alarms and sprinklers came to life
redeye
LizaJane
08-18-2011, 05:44 AM
my clothes
cover my sins
in denim and cotton
veiling the ravages of time and
regret
B.D. Eyeslie
08-18-2011, 06:56 PM
regret
little in life,
though sins may be many.
the pure luck of surviving youth--
retreat.
Ciggie Moondust
08-19-2011, 12:12 AM
retreat
my only one,
my blind man, my failure:
you'll only grind your dead old bones
to ash.
B.D. Eyeslie
08-19-2011, 08:35 PM
to ash
with my folly
a thought out plan, indeed.
I'm back at the beach selling slush:
two bucks.
CDSinex
08-20-2011, 06:19 AM
Removed for submission elsewhere.
Ciggie Moondust
08-20-2011, 06:42 AM
August
ineffable--
with all this sweat streaking
down my back, so am I, for shame,
for shame!
B.D. Eyeslie
08-20-2011, 07:10 PM
For shame,
I ran away.
Fears in a foriegn land
brought me back to where I began:
injured.
kdnxdr
08-20-2011, 10:47 PM
injured
during childhood,
scars linger until dusk
when mercy remembers no more;
death comes
Perscribo
08-20-2011, 11:07 PM
Death comes--
in wake of dirge-
piped waterworks streamed down
in virulent, over-rich ditch
--devoid.
Ciggie Moondust
08-21-2011, 01:42 AM
Devoid,
sanctity seized,
revenge unsanctioned, you
traverse the narrow line, repent--
succumb.
kdnxdr
08-21-2011, 07:55 AM
succumb!
shouts the tyrant;
relinquish your self will,
bow to my authority, now!
give up!
celestialwolf
08-21-2011, 07:25 PM
Give up!
While you still can,
Before the bug bites you,
For once the bug has bitten you,
You’ll write.
B.D. Eyeslie
08-22-2011, 03:58 AM
You'll write.
I'll read it all.
You'll say it's not for me.
I'll torture myself forever.
You'll shrug.
CDSinex
08-23-2011, 03:25 AM
You'll shrug.
I’ll walk away.
You’ll call, I’ll turn around—
A little game played with one on
each side.
Ciggie Moondust
08-23-2011, 04:42 AM
Each side
quarters itself
serves its blood meat to beasts,
sews its seams back up as the pack
shrinks back.
B.D. Eyeslie
08-23-2011, 07:00 AM
Shrinks back
with a six pack
when the field lights come on.
High school to no school in one step--
busted.
celestialwolf
08-24-2011, 07:16 AM
Busted.
Swollen split lip.
I don’t care if it stings.
I said what I needed to say.
Bastard.
Ciggie Moondust
08-25-2011, 12:26 AM
Bastard
son of a shit,
go fuck yourself sideways:
come around here again and I'll
castrate.
B.D. Eyeslie
08-25-2011, 09:22 PM
castrate
into the pond
trout nibble on the bait
feel the pain as the hook digs deep
rainbow.
CDSinex
08-25-2011, 11:03 PM
Rainbow
arcs in the sky
pointing to pots of gold.
There for the taking (or so I've
been told.)
celestialwolf
08-25-2011, 11:04 PM
Been told.
Several times.
I don't listen that well.
It's not that I don't hear you speak.
Ignored.
B.D. Eyeslie
08-26-2011, 07:01 AM
Ignored
since arrival--
responsibility.
A baby speaks its own language:
Change me!
kdnxdr
08-26-2011, 07:44 AM
change me!
make me my best,
fulfilled to be myself,
complete to know I'm part of you;
I'm whole.
Ciggie Moondust
08-26-2011, 11:49 PM
I'm whole
insatiable
it's you I'll draw/quarter
until I'm more than me, than you--
teeming.
CDSinex
08-27-2011, 02:03 AM
Teeming
asphalt rivers,
canyons of steel and glass.
Three-hundred miles due north, Marshfield—
and you.
B.D. Eyeslie
08-28-2011, 02:08 AM
And you,
what's your story?
... So, you think that's unique,
a school for wizzards and witches?
Big deal!
Ciggie Moondust
08-28-2011, 02:25 AM
Big deal,
that Dumbledore,
waved his wand, all hot shit -
when I graduate from Hogwarts,
I'll rule.
kdnxdr
08-28-2011, 05:26 AM
I'll rule;
it's a hen's house,
no cockafoolery;
if I want a peep out of you,
I'll ask
CDSinex
08-28-2011, 11:20 AM
I'll ask
if I need to.
You’ll answer, when you want.
The perfect sunset— sitting in
silence.
Blarg
08-28-2011, 11:39 AM
Silence
is a gift that
cannot be given to
everyone; most want to open
the box.
CDSinex
08-29-2011, 03:47 AM
The box
thumps louder now
in hollow emptiness.
Its use long since served— awaiting
trash day.
B.D. Eyeslie
08-29-2011, 06:56 AM
Trash day
lightens my load.
I've given all I can.
Now, you'll be leaning on the law,
gasping.
kdnxdr
08-29-2011, 08:47 AM
gasping,
you were suprised;
thinking I'd gone away,
startled disbelief traced my face,
you smiled
B.D. Eyeslie
08-29-2011, 04:57 PM
you smiled
the smile that says
I'm here and I won't go--
the smile I've seen a thousand times
before.
Ciggie Moondust
08-30-2011, 01:12 AM
Ban me;
I demand it.
I'm stirring up shit, see?
Now click that button and watch me
vanish.
celestialwolf
08-30-2011, 02:26 AM
Vanish.
Pseudo did it.
With just barely a click.
A triolet- robbed of its life.
Now gone.
pseudo
08-30-2011, 02:32 AM
now gone
like my last post
I screwed up the format
please forgive my newbie mistake
sorry
Ciggie Moondust
08-30-2011, 02:35 AM
Now gone -
will I come back?
Come and go as I please
that's how I roll, you'd best believe -
take that!
OOPS.
Sorry?
Fear not, pseudo -
forgiveness abounds, yes,
please post long and prosper, new one -
hooray.
pseudo
08-30-2011, 03:22 AM
hooray!
sweet redemption
I have been forgiven
for the sins of errors long past
one love
celestialwolf
08-30-2011, 04:10 AM
One love,
Among many,
That possesses my heart,
Whom makes happiness tangible,
Dearest.
Ciggie Moondust
08-30-2011, 04:47 AM
Dearest:
delirious,
that is what you make me -
but when the skies rain neon frogs
you're gone.
Tedashii
08-30-2011, 05:26 AM
You're gone
You're gone with the wind
Drifting past the white clouds
Floating in the air for a breath
Gasping
ETA: I NINJA'D THE POSTER BELOW ME!
CDSinex
08-30-2011, 05:52 AM
Gasping,
a rainbow trout
hangs from a barbless hook.
A catch and release mood— you’re so
lucky.
pseudo
08-30-2011, 06:16 AM
lucky
how your tattoo
hides the nicotine tears
that paints you into your last breath
how coy
kdnxdr
08-30-2011, 09:40 AM
how coy,
to take a walk
and simply talk of love,
when so much begs discovery;
let's dance
pseudo
08-31-2011, 01:21 AM
lets dance
with glassy eyes
that laugh in the crimson
of a stolen taboo sunset
shall we?
Blarg
08-31-2011, 02:33 AM
Shall we?
Galloping night
thrusts a cooling lance through
the belly of blistered day; ride
away.
pseudo
08-31-2011, 06:34 AM
away
where fade to black
the sentient wet dream
that falls from the curves of her smile
cuts me
celestialwolf
08-31-2011, 06:44 AM
Cuts me,
To the marrow,
The harsh words that you speak,
My ego cries droplets of blood,
Depressed.
B.D. Eyeslie
08-31-2011, 06:48 AM
Depresed
So let it go.
Find another thread where
the writers are slower of thought.
Move on.
pseudo
08-31-2011, 07:11 AM
move on
and hide the scars
that covets your coffee
one more sip to conceal the tears
for now
celestialwolf
08-31-2011, 07:15 AM
Gah! A two for one..
Move on?
B.D. Eyeslie!
Dare not speak such laments!
Simply post another poem!
My friend.
--
For now,
I too am slow,
Slower than the Pseudo,
Who has beaten me to the punch,
Again.
kdnxdr
08-31-2011, 03:37 PM
again
love leaves its mark,
loneliness drinks a beer;
a bleeding heart without a sleeve,
drowning
B.D. Eyeslie
08-31-2011, 04:48 PM
Drowning
in a tea cup
filled with vile intentions,
never again to cross your path.
Gypsy
pseudo
09-01-2011, 12:20 AM
gypsy
steal my skin tone
with your seasonal kiss
tempt me with your jazz-lit decor
break me
Ciggie Moondust
09-01-2011, 12:58 AM
break me,
siphon blood dust,
down the elixir, drown;
stumble through tumbleweeds, vanquish
yourself.
B.D. Eyeslie
09-01-2011, 06:24 AM
Yourself,
a starting point,
concentrate on your soul;
then carve your pumpkin till it fits.
Mingle.
Ciggie Moondust
09-01-2011, 06:30 AM
mingle
pancreatic
Wonka overload, child;
spun sugar veins disintegrate
don't faint.
pseudo
09-01-2011, 07:31 AM
don't faint
while I conform
to the shape of your hush
the scent of your utopia
deep breath
B.D. Eyeslie
09-01-2011, 06:34 PM
Deep breath ...
Now squeeze the breeze;
see the mobile flutter.
Origami cradle keepers.
Don't touch!
CDSinex
09-02-2011, 12:15 AM
Don't touch!
Beware of snakes!
Warns the hand written sign—
The Village Store petunia bed,
Marshfield
pseudo
09-03-2011, 05:27 AM
marshfield
in the tabloids
celebrating the flash
of her symbiotic lip gloss
exposed
Ciggie Moondust
09-03-2011, 05:33 AM
exposed
our residue,
trampled the valleys of
our obscene slapdash dance, and down
we plunged.
CDSinex
09-03-2011, 06:22 AM
We plunged
like the necklines
of eager starlets gowns.
A falling out? I guess— The price
of fame.
B.D. Eyeslie
09-03-2011, 06:28 AM
Of fame
I have little.
My resources are few,
but given half a fighting chance,
I will.
kdnxdr
09-03-2011, 11:51 AM
I will
exercise choice,
its opportunity
fleeting in midst of change; soon gone
freedom
pseudo
09-03-2011, 01:07 PM
freedom
that condemns me
for simply wanting you
within the always present more
of time
B.D. Eyeslie
09-03-2011, 09:56 PM
Of time,
it's betrayal
of the promises made;
the cutest look turned to a scowl
one day.
kdnxdr
09-04-2011, 09:01 AM
one day,
like another,
repeatedly counted
takes time captive and keeps you still;
I hope
pseudo
09-05-2011, 05:08 AM
I hope
I'm underage
when karma ignores me
and your applause betrays my face
fail me
celestialwolf
09-05-2011, 05:50 AM
Fail me?
You never do.
On you I can depend.
Regardless of the obstacle.
My wife.
kdnxdr
09-05-2011, 08:23 AM
my wife
like ying and yang,
love reciprocated;
without the storm, there is no rain;
we grow
B.D. Eyeslie
09-05-2011, 11:05 PM
we grow
weeds on our lawn,
and we try to sell them.
A few are taken in by this
nonsense.
celestialwolf
09-08-2011, 08:54 PM
Nonsense!
I say to thee
This ship does fly indeed!
With a good heading and a crew
We fly!
B.D. Eyeslie
09-08-2011, 10:44 PM
We fly
into rare air,
the heights of bombastry.
Those are envious stares below--
honest.
celestialwolf
09-08-2011, 11:14 PM
Honest.
Or so you thought.
Snake oil, white lies and charm.
The real man behind the curtain.
Bastard.
pseudo
09-09-2011, 05:34 AM
bastard
pierce me again
with your steam-risen eyes
and undress my jaded dogma
force me
CDSinex
09-09-2011, 06:22 AM
Force me
to mind my place.
To stay behind the wall
you built, entrapped until the dam
gives way.
celestialwolf
09-10-2011, 01:16 AM
Gives way,
My will power,
Like it always seems to,
No matter how much I fight it,
I lose.
CDSinex
09-10-2011, 02:12 AM
I lose
all sense of time
along this gentile brook.
Watching leaves float off to where I
once lived.
Ciggie Moondust
09-10-2011, 02:48 AM
once lived
alabaster
thrice reincarnated
muddying up the broken streams
of ink.
B.D. Eyeslie
09-10-2011, 09:20 PM
Of ink,
my story bleeds
from the rite of sunrise
to the last ceremonial
sunset.
Tedashii
09-10-2011, 10:51 PM
Sunset!
It glows for lust,
Lust of the darkness!
The beauty of a paradox...
Beauty.
CDSinex
09-11-2011, 04:24 AM
(If making the first word possessive is cheating, sorry.)
Beauty's
found in some eyes,
but in yours only rage,
exploding like a summer storm –
then calm.
B.D. Eyeslie
09-12-2011, 02:53 AM
Then calm
the savage beast;
I cannot control him.
Sadly, the bait speaks from the trap.
Haunted.
Ciggie Moondust
09-12-2011, 03:06 AM
haunted
unhallowed ground
concealed beneath the frost
spectral ceremonies exhume
our breaths
CDSinex
09-12-2011, 04:46 AM
Our breaths
are soft white haze
in winter's frozen air.
You lean in close –your warm words greet
my ear.
Tedashii
09-12-2011, 05:32 AM
My ear
Can hear you now
Everything is now clear
I can see for miles and miles and
It's clear!
kdnxdr
09-12-2011, 05:53 AM
it's clear;
water's deep store
like memories released;
the torrent washes pain away,
I float
Tedashii
09-12-2011, 05:59 AM
I float
In the sky's cloud
I am a bird flying
My wings are my key to freedom
Unlock....
kdnxdr
09-12-2011, 06:47 AM
unlock
my mysteries;
solve my life's great questions;
this riddle is for you alone,
my love
B.D. Eyeslie
09-12-2011, 05:01 PM
My love
unheralded,
though the feelings are real,
I must never give voice to the
passion ...
celestialwolf
09-12-2011, 06:59 PM
Passion..
Why do people
Sometimes lose their passion?
Oh how they wish to rekindle
Their lust.
Tedashii
09-12-2011, 11:33 PM
Their lust
Mirrors into
Deceitful gluttony.
They already have it, why more?
Hunger....
CDSinex
09-13-2011, 01:19 AM
Hunger
takes many forms—
Memories of a child
still walking the hills behind my
old house.
B.D. Eyeslie
09-14-2011, 07:56 PM
Old house--
a new rodent
chews the electric wires.
It started in the walls and spread--
panic.
kdnxdr
09-15-2011, 12:42 AM
panic
freezes our thoughts,
turns us into statues,
begs for release that never comes;
relax
B.D. Eyeslie
09-15-2011, 08:19 PM
Relax,
take a deep breath.
It's not as bad as that.
The fire is in our hearts and minds.
Exhale.
CDSinex
09-16-2011, 02:14 AM
Exhale;
the wood is in,
jam and pickles are up,
storm windows washed –now ready for
winter.
Blarg
09-16-2011, 02:49 AM
Winter
dusts the woodchips
the dog buried the bone
under; next spring a tree of bones
blossoms.
CDSinex
09-16-2011, 05:52 AM
Blossoms,
wilted by frost,
now lying on the ground—
Enough! Time to put the garden
to bed
kdnxdr
09-16-2011, 07:35 AM
to bed,
pillow to head,
snuggled 'neath the blankets;
discovering each others' love,
we play
LizaJane
09-16-2011, 10:50 AM
we play
while the sun shines,
before the shadows lurk
and edge us toward the slumbering,
dense night
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