Could someone please take a look at Animal Island

[Ty T]

I was wondering if someone could please take a look at Animal Island on the share your work board. My agent has requested that I send him the start of my new project but I was wondering if I could get your opinions on it beforehand

[DJpilsner]

why chum the waters in the screenwriting forum?

[Ty T]

Oh god sorry, I meant to post that in the writing novels board

Sorry

Maybe a moderator can delete my post