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HoosierCowgirl
07-27-2007, 07:34 AM
Hello, friends,
I guess I'm having a senior moment ... I'm working on something set in the 1860s and am wracking my brain trying to think of the right word.
In my modern mind, I'd say "You are so busted ..." but can't think of a good synonym for busted, as in someone who's now going to face charges. Pinched? Collared?
Any input appreciated ...
Ann
dpaterso
07-27-2007, 04:05 PM
Reckon you bin caught with yor finger in the pie, mister! Might as well 'fess up! Judge might go easier on ya!
Sorry. :) red-handed?
-Derek
seven41
07-28-2007, 09:02 PM
From THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO EVERYDAY LIFE IN THE 1800's, the three terms commonly used were pinched, pulled, or tumbled. Once pinched they were taken to the calaboose or, if they were to be questioned, put in the sweat box.
You might also check Writer's Dreamtools.com. It gives slang and events by decade.
HoosierCowgirl
07-30-2007, 08:23 AM
Thanks, Seven ... the bad guy's going to either get lynched, "pinched" or time-travel out of the 1800s into the arms of the SWAT team.
Vanatru
07-31-2007, 02:17 AM
That or using a variation on a modern saying:
"Son, you done right pissed me off, I'm gonna have to open a saddlebag of whoop ass on ya."
seven41
07-31-2007, 02:56 AM
"Son, you done right pissed me off, I'm gonna have to open a saddlebag of whoop ass on ya."
Use that and you'll lose your western readers in a hurry. We didn't even use that kind of language in the 1940's and 50's. More likely, the good guy or lawman would say, "Now you boys just come along peaceful like and nobody's gonna git hurt."
Festus
07-31-2007, 06:13 AM
Seven is right, both in perception and suggested words of a law officer, rarely did 'mouthy language' need to be utilized by the officer. One thing, they knew most everybody in the area, the other thing is that they didn't want to give a reason for the caught crook to cause trouble.
They'd likely, as seven suggested, be brief in their comments.
HoosierCowgirl
08-01-2007, 02:08 AM
I did look up some Apalachian slang on another website but it didn't have much about arrest or jail.
I was surprised how many of those terms are still in my dad's and other elders' vocabulary.
Thanks, everybody.
Ann
Vanatru
08-02-2007, 02:40 AM
My bad. I should have included the "ha ha" and a smiley at the end. Of course, it's rare that I crack jokes here so I can see how it would be taken as being all serious like and all. ;)
seven41
08-02-2007, 03:09 AM
No offense taken. It's just us se'rus writers from Texas get literal.
JeanneTGC
08-04-2007, 10:37 AM
My bad. I should have included the "ha ha" and a smiley at the end. Of course, it's rare that I crack jokes here so I can see how it would be taken as being all serious like and all. ;)
Van, you can be serious? Really? I mean, really and truly?
I'm shocked. I never would've guessed.
If it'd been a snake it would've bit me, I guess. :D
HoosierCowgirl
08-04-2007, 10:53 PM
I'm sure-nuff in the wrong place if humor is allowed!
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