First five pages done

[MrWrite]

I finally got round to starting on my first screenplay. I just sat down this afternoon and wrote out my first scene. It's a scene that is pivotal to the whole story and I wanted to see how it would look. I am happy with what I have so far. The scene worked out how I wanted it to and didn't look stupid (in my opinion anyway!).
I am writing a supernatural thriller. I don't want to post any pages yet as this is my first draft and I want to leave it as is for a week or two then go back and re-read it to see if I am still happy with it. It's very rough and I know will need a bit of re-wording. Once I have checked it over and corrected anything I feel needs correcting then I will put a couple of pages on this site to get some feedback if that's ok? After all, while I am happy so far I am a complete beginner at this so some feedback from some of you experts out there would be greatly appreciated!

[dpaterso]

So far so good! :)

Just asking, you know there's a Screenwriting forum in Share Your Work? See sigline below if you're not sure how to get there. Courage, mon ami. :)

-Derek

[MrWrite]

Ok thanks Derek I wasn't sure if I was posting in the right place

[dpaterso]

Sorry for any confusion, I meant post your script pages in SYW Screenwriting when you're ready. :)

-Derek

[MrWrite]

Oops LOL. I just posted same message on the one you mentioned. Oh well it'll whet their appetites for when I post the pages ;)