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Reservoir Angel

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Why wouldn't it work? A female character written as prostitute cum spy is done often enough. Why not a male?
Because it's kind of absurd. Especially since this is kind of the villain we're talking about. Villains need to have at least some semblance of being taken seriously, and I'm not sure "humping your way through the aristocracy" is a method that demands much of that as much as it does weird looks and head shaking.
 

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I'm trying to learn how to take criticism, and then how to incorporate that criticism into my revisions. It's not an easy process. If I were on my favorite gaming forum I'd just say "This sucks." Here at AW I expect myself to be more articulate... No, this just sucks. :tongue
 

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And I've done the same thing, although I held off on the self-flagellation until the rejection mail came back. I did, however, console myself by thinking that those who'd reviewed my POS manuscript had a good laugh. So there it is.
I got an R&R on it.
 

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I have such a problem not getting carried away with cutesy writing, especially with one character who has a very hammy streak and tends to talk nonsense like he's a cross-breed between an Oscar Wilde character and Albert Campion, with Lord Peter/Lymond thrown in for his tendency to quote everything from the Scripture to Ovid. It's so fun and so easy to overdo.

R-E-S-T-R-A-I-N-T is how it's spelled but it's so hard!
 

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It feels so good not to be working every waking moment of the day. Last week, I managed one day of novel writing, and it felt so good. So what if I’m as rusty as an old railroad spike and only wrote 500 words before things began to peter out. The well is overflowing again, and now all I have to do is get back in shape. That’s the easy part. Between the scorching summer that just ended, desperately needing rain, and the quiet winter ushers in, I’m actually looking forward to the long, dreary, cold months to come, which is a first.
 

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Right now I'm working on a dark fiction novella for an anthology where the tension of time is the theme. It'll probably be about 20k; I was striving for 25 but it ends where it ends. I'm not sure as this moment if the tension is there; but this is the first draft. Once rewrites begin, I can zero in on what sort of elements can really keep the reader anxious to know what happens next. There are some graphic scenes of non-consensual sex and death that I believe is contextual with the premise of the story (end of the world!) I Have to submit by the end of the month so I hope there's enough time to get it read and critiqued before I send it away!!!

I'm also working on a dark fantasy/dark romance novel. This is the longest word count I've ever tried to wrangle! It's getting done, though! I feel like I'm in a love affair and my poor boyfriend and he just has to deal, particularly since I'm gunning to write it in a month. If it doesn't happen, then it doesn't happen... but it will! And I know I'm crazy to do this during the holidays. But please, Santa, that's all I want for Xmas!

@Reservoir Angel -- Of course a male prostitute works! How seriously your reader takes the character depends on how you portray him. As a reader, I'd be more than intrigued to read about a character like that. Although, based on my own experience, who they service might be where the realism gets a little tricky. Gay male escorts, for example, might have more business than a hetero. Also, male prostitutes don't always just have sex (depending on clientele). I will second a reference to Kushiel's Dart, where Phedre was a high-class submissive. Your prostitute can be a date for older women, and thus have access to information he may need. Or he could be a male dominant who doesn't have sex with clients. Or he could be running an agency of prostitutes who gather intel from clients. Don't let the prostitute angle limit you!
 

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Trying to learn about authors who also develop video games, especially if they can tie together. I want examples that do not deal with table top games or games based on such games. It seems kind of different, to me.

I think.

Or maybe it's not? I dunno. :(
 

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I have plot bunnies. I have enough plot bunnies that I was able to update my signature from "Vague Untitled Concept #1" to "Getting more Interesting by the Minute Concept #1." I also got an idea for a flash fiction piece which I can use to practice both my writing and editing skills without feeling like I'm messing up the stories I'm really attached to.
 

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I started writing a new book today. I'm already about 2,000 words in. I set my goal at 150,000, but I hope it's a bit shorter than that. At least I feel fairly confident I'll finish this one because I wrote out the whole outline beforehand.

A lot of people say that makes writing it less fun, but it works the other way for me. Writing the outline makes my excited to write the story, especially the really exciting scenes.
 

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Reworking several mid-point chapters because I did something stupid when I wrote them. :D What a pain, but it's getting done.
 

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Not even over the sudoku thing yet, and now they're re-tiling the apartment roof... I'm having terrible luck this month, aren't I.
 

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My wip characters are about to enter a bookstore. I'm afraid of what my mind will do with this scene.
 

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I've discovered that writing is the easy part. Scenes are okay too. But Plotting and characterization, emotion and keeping all your little threads together, omg, that's tough. Making sure your characters actions make sense, that's tough. You edit one thread and a hundred little threads unravel.

But the book is getting better. Tweak by tweak, wrench by wrench, it's getting better.
 
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I've managed my 3,000 words for today. I love having an outline. It allows me to write so much faster.
 

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Because it's kind of absurd. Especially since this is kind of the villain we're talking about. Villains need to have at least some semblance of being taken seriously, and I'm not sure "humping your way through the aristocracy" is a method that demands much of that as much as it does weird looks and head shaking.

I really don't see why not, though! After all, "femme fatale" and "black widow" are popular villain archetypes. I don't see why you couldn't do the same with a male character. He could be plenty sinister as long as you throw in a suitable amount of ruthlessness, blackmail, backstabbing, poisoning of wealthy widows or inconveniently pregnant clients, and so forth. Gigolo-type characters are usually played for laughs in popular fiction, but that doesn't mean they have to be; it seems to me that a guy who cleverly and viciously seduces wealthy women (or men, or both) and mines them for their secrets could be very threatening indeed.
 

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Eeerp - or something.

I've managed my 3,000 words for today. I love having an outline. It allows me to write so much faster.
If I'd outlined my wip before I started, I wouldn't now be wading around in the middle chapters, some 25k words, trying to arrange them into something intelligible.
 

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I need some more worldbuilding in my short story. There are two major catastrophes and I Just need to focus on the one.

In my novel, the MCs are getting interesting. I'm going have fun with this!
 

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Ever since I started reading them I've been wanting to try my hand at writing comics/graphic novel style, but don't even know how to begin approaching such a thing.
 

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Ugh I'm not feeling confident about my novella. The deadline submission is at the end of the month and with rewrites and fact-checking still needed, I don't know if it will be ready. This was kind of a mess from the start. I didn't really have a good story. I winged this one, which isn't my thing. An outline is necessary, in which case I may submit somewhere else since I don't know if it will be ready by 12/31. Next month there are a couple of other places I want to submit to and they're due within a month. So I'm wondering if I should shelf this current project to work on other ideas that have been fleshed out until I figure out what the hell I want from this story.

In other news my novel is coming along quite well. I'm excited for it, and I'm excited about being excited about it. Stayed up until midnight writing. This week will be the hump! My quota is a little over 30k words by the end of the week, which will bring me over halfway done! Whew... I'm feeling positive about it. :evil