I'm revising my YA novel and originally I had written the MC's thoughts as:
Surely, her father had a secret, she thought.
Now, in revision I have eliminated the tags and written the thoughts in italics.
Surely my father has a secret.
It's third person limited. The story takes place in the past.
My question then is, how do you write the MC's thoughts? In the present?
In the past? and if it is in the past, the main charaqcter wouldn't think about herself in the third person.
I'm getting myself confused.
I think 1st person is so much easier to write. Any clarification would be appreciated.
Thanks.
Surely, her father had a secret, she thought.
Now, in revision I have eliminated the tags and written the thoughts in italics.
Surely my father has a secret.
It's third person limited. The story takes place in the past.
My question then is, how do you write the MC's thoughts? In the present?
In the past? and if it is in the past, the main charaqcter wouldn't think about herself in the third person.
I'm getting myself confused.
I think 1st person is so much easier to write. Any clarification would be appreciated.
Thanks.