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Currently my WIP in all its drafts is in the normal 3rd person limited with it only following my MC. At times I'm just bored with the narrative like its just going through the motions as required in between the much more interesting character interactions. I'm also having trouble with a few scenes later on where he is not present or is taking actions that turn him into the "bad guy" of the book. Like anyone else in this situation I'm rethinking how the story is presented and I think came across an interesting idea.
What if I told the story as a retelling by the MC's brother? What I mean by this is that he'll tell the story as a third person narrator while including his own character in descriptions and sarcastic asides. He only shows up three times with two being brief scenes and the other taking up the majority of a chapter midway through the book. In those scenes he'd refer to himself as I, possibly taking the form of what seems to be first person omniscient as he knows what both characters are thinking. This would also give me the liberty to use the scenes with only the supporting cast provided it makes sense he had an opportunity to talk and meet with them after the events of the story come to a conclusion.
Considering everything so far I think it works out perfectly. Still, I have some doubts. How would a reader react to such a strange POV? Are there any examples where this has been done? Would the scenes with the first person POV confuse the reader?
What if I told the story as a retelling by the MC's brother? What I mean by this is that he'll tell the story as a third person narrator while including his own character in descriptions and sarcastic asides. He only shows up three times with two being brief scenes and the other taking up the majority of a chapter midway through the book. In those scenes he'd refer to himself as I, possibly taking the form of what seems to be first person omniscient as he knows what both characters are thinking. This would also give me the liberty to use the scenes with only the supporting cast provided it makes sense he had an opportunity to talk and meet with them after the events of the story come to a conclusion.
Considering everything so far I think it works out perfectly. Still, I have some doubts. How would a reader react to such a strange POV? Are there any examples where this has been done? Would the scenes with the first person POV confuse the reader?