Okay, introduce and kill your character in one sentence. If you're just sick of those rejections, take your anger out on your innocent characters. Me first!
Enali was a unicorn of pure innocence, but she found herself crushed underneath a one ton boulder, blood oozing from underneath the earthen mass.
Enali was a unicorn of pure innocence, but she found herself crushed underneath a one ton boulder, blood oozing from underneath the earthen mass.