The 1st Annual Great Purgatory Mash-Up

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Match the Punctuation Game is telling me #1 is Inkwench.
 

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*snickering* ooohhhh.... mine will be sooo obvious... :D

I've got nothing to add: everyone said it already!!! It was a great pairing and the two wrote really well together, though the second was a bit different. To me, the tone was different. (Of course, I've spent the past years co-writing and can pick out who wrote what and Mark can copy my writing almost perfectly...)

Regardless, it was A GREAT read!!! and of course, I'm wondering what happens next! lol
 

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Uh-oh. Match the Punctuation Game is also pinging justme. (I'm working my way down the list, comparing a certain quirk.)

edit: houndrat is scoring a positive as well, but I would be expecting about fifty thousand times more slang in a piece this long.

Okay, I'm done. In order of likeliness:

1. justme
2. inkwench
3. houndrat

edit again: on reflection, inkwench is very exacting about spelling and punctuation, so I'm kicking her further down the list. Man, I'm glad I don't actually have to choose between these three. :tongue

final edit: I'm about 90% sure it's justme.
 
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Uh-oh. Match the Punctuation Game is also pinging justme. (I'm working my way down the list, comparing a certain quirk.)

And another winner! Para, you get a cookie!

Really? Match the Punctuation Game? Who'da thought???

Y'all are still going to have to wait til tomorrow for the next one. :D
 

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I am so freaking good. :tongue

I matched this particular sentence structure:

No way I would be able to explain my disappearance—if I survived.
My claws gouged at his paws—if only I could reach his head, I’d gouge his eyes out.
My claws held a death grip on my purse—I couldn’t lose it.


It's not big, but three times in 350 words is pretty frequent. Only houndrat, inkwench and justme used this structure in their teasers: it's not slangy enough for houndrat, it doesn't read like inkwench, but it definitely matches justme.
 

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I am so freaking good. :tongue

I matched this particular sentence structure:

No way I would be able to explain my disappearance—if I survived.
My claws gouged at his paws—if only I could reach his head, I’d gouge his eyes out.
My claws held a death grip on my purse—I couldn’t lose it.


It's not big, but three times in 350 words is pretty frequent. Only houndrat, inkwench and justme used this structure in their teasers: it's not slangy enough for houndrat, it doesn't read like inkwench, but it definitely matches justme.

I am in awe of your punctuation tracking awesomeness :Hail:
 

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Para is the queen of the mash-up detecting.

~suki
 

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Got home too late to play on this first one, but I have to say I really liked both pieces! I can't wait to see the rest of them.
 

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MASH-UP #2

You guys did amazingly well with the first one. So let's see how you do with this!

~~~~~

Shui spun one way, then the other, claws raking the air where Aydin had stood. Gavin grabbed him around the neck and when he shoved that odd but beautiful knife against Shui's throat, the gargoyle froze.

"Don't make me use it." Gavin slid the knife gently over the gray, scaly skin, but didn't cut him. From the panicked look on Shui's face, I could tell this knife was special.

Interesting. The knife held some kind of power over the gargoyle. Was it enchanted? Coated in poison strong enough to kill an immortal?

Shui's eyes closed, an expression of calm replacing his alarm. In that instant he appeared almost human. As if resigned to follow his master's command, he remained still, chest heaving, his leathery wings folded and tucked close to his sides.

Gavin shoved him at me. I stiffened when Shui clutched both my shoulders to flip me onto my stomach on the bed.

"Careful," Gavin said.

His claws sliced through my jacket, his hot breath bathing my neck as the room's cool air chilled my bloody back. Shui hovered close, inhaling my scent, one claw tracing an immature wing that struggled to break free. He'd rip the wing off if he could, and use it like a toothpick after dining on what was left of my human body.

But he didn't. He leaned down and ran his slimy tongue over my tattoo, letting it linger there. I didn't protest. I needed my fix, and maybe it would take longer this time for his saliva to take effect. The fever stopped almost immediately, and I felt my baby wings shrink, drawing themselves back inside my body. It hurt, but I didn't mind. I just wanted them gone.

Shui retreated and hobbled back to Gavin.

I lay on the hard, lumpy bed, silent and exhausted, and thoroughly relieved. I wondered if Aydin was still in the room somewhere. Had he witnessed what had happened, what I'd let Shui do? That was my last thought before I passed out.

#

When I finally woke up, I rolled over and felt a warm body next to me. It was Gavin.

“You know eventually this isn’t going to work anymore and the transformation will happen.” He was lying on his back, speaking so casually, as if we were lovers.

It was easy for him to say. He wasn’t the one changing. However, I knew he was the only one who could help me.

“You’ve reversed the process before. I’ve heard stories about you.”

He sat up and looked down at me. “I’m thrilled that you think that highly of me, but it’s not as easy as you make it sound.” He glanced over at the fireplace. Shui was there, leering at me.

I couldn’t stand the sight of the creature. He was a constant reminder of what I was to become.

“Where’s Aydin?”

“He is safe,” Gavin answered, “for now.”

“Did he see…”

“No. Your secret is still safe.”

I sat up. Waves of pain crashed inside my skull like a stormy sea. “What was with the blade? Quasimodo over there freaked out at the sight of it.”

“A little insurance policy. Sometimes he gets carried away, and I need to remind him there are consequences for his actions.”

“Is that what you’ll do to me? Threaten me with that blade, or worse.”

His eyes locked onto mine, and his features softened. “Never,” he whispered.

“Then you’ll help me?”

Gavin let out a sigh that spoke more than any words could.

I knew he had strong feelings for me. “Please.” I hated begging.

“And if I do… what will you do for me?”

Swallowing hard, I answered. “Anything.”
 

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amazing! loved both entries--sarah, you pretended to write the
genre very well!

i want to be thrown in to continue as mystery guest.
hee! i'm at a disadvantage if people have read my book
(and my sequel words would be obvious), but i haven't
put many teasers up (advantage)!

but that's probably breaking the rules.
 

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This is so much fun! I loving reading these!!

I fear mine is going to be difficult as I've never done a Tuesday Teaser, but we will see.

Not sure who these authors are, but I loved the writing!
 

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I'd like to claim I used my skills of genius, but I recognise #1 from Karen's sig. It's from Knight's Curse.

#2 is fiendishly tough! I require time to ponder.
 

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Ahahaha. Sweet punctuation, you never betray me. Compare #2 to sister's teaser. It's cunningly concealed by the YA voice, but I think we have a match. :D

I think I agree with this. But who's #1?

#2 really did a great job being faithful to the original material.

Edited to add: OH, jeez, I posted this without reading the rest of the thread somehow. Para solved the whole thing! You are good!
 
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Wow, I am in awe of Para's mad detective skillz!

As for the second, I also recognize a snippet from Karen's old sig, but I'll need to think on person #2.
 

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Oooohhh, this is so much fun! Good job Para on figuring out the first post. I don't know who person #2 is either, but I really enjoyed the excerpt.
 

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Para, you are scary. :Hail:

Hmm. Also got #1 from Karen's sig, but #2 is a tough one.
 

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Para, you are an astute observer! :) I'm surprised anyone remembered my old sig, let alone actually read it. Whoever added to my snippet was fairly close to guessing what happens next. It was so fun to read their take on the scene.
 

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Wow, Para!! :Hail:

Now that you mention it, I can see that it's Karen for #1 but I get that more from her descriptions and her imagination. As for #2, I haven't a clue. It fits well, although it's more or less pure dialogue so I can see a difference.
 
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