A while ago, when I was revising the novel, I thought of this "personal pronoun issue".
There are too many male characters, hence too much "he" "his" "they" "their" and so on. Perhaps I'm not skillful yet. But would it be easier for people to understand the story, if I just change it to first person POV?
In that case, there would be "I" "my" and "we" "our" etc. I think it's easier to tell the characters apart.
Do you agree? Look forward to your opinions. Because it would be a huge task to do the 100,000 words again. -.- Thank you.
There are too many male characters, hence too much "he" "his" "they" "their" and so on. Perhaps I'm not skillful yet. But would it be easier for people to understand the story, if I just change it to first person POV?
In that case, there would be "I" "my" and "we" "our" etc. I think it's easier to tell the characters apart.
Do you agree? Look forward to your opinions. Because it would be a huge task to do the 100,000 words again. -.- Thank you.
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