Lindz--haha, you might be all, WTF? I've already written three new chapters that come before the chapter one you've read. Now, I'm just trying something different to see if I like it better. (but I'm keeping all the world-building/tech stuff I added for sure).
Why do I torture myself again? Oh yeah, bc I'm a writer.
That and we're all our own worst critics...human nature WILL prevail...it's inevitable! We could have something that everyone else thinks is awesome & we'll look at it and say "Nah...I think that I need to tweak this....put a little of that in there....and oh yeah....add this, that, & the other thing. LOL