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Okay so, in the narrative, we're conveying information that the character knows.
Whenever doing so is convenient and elegant -- and the information conveyed reflects the character's current mindset -- one can use free indirect discourse (introspection) instead of [exposition / narrative / backflashes / etc.].
Okay I have no idea if that even makes sense, so I'll use an example.
(Warning: the example makes zero sense. Analogous sections are highlighted in red.)
(Since I'm coming up with this example on the spot, it's probably suboptimal in ways. The introspection is a bit melodramatic. Two questions? I think one would be better? Maybe "His mother had decorated the living room with a bunch of snakes. Did the argument with dad have anything to do with it?"? Anyway, that's irrelevant.)
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Lol, at this point I remembered that I have two books and a few articles that answer my question.
Okay, I've read those sources and they don't really answer it.
Anyway, when you're dealing with past events (that the character is aware of), how do you decide whether to render them as regular narrative or as introspection?
Whenever doing so is convenient and elegant -- and the information conveyed reflects the character's current mindset -- one can use free indirect discourse (introspection) instead of [exposition / narrative / backflashes / etc.].
Okay I have no idea if that even makes sense, so I'll use an example.
(Warning: the example makes zero sense. Analogous sections are highlighted in red.)
[FONT=Georgia, serif]Clyde walked into the room. Snakes draped the chandeliers. His mother had decorated the living room with a bunch of snakes after getting into an argument with his father, and Clyde found it all ridiculous.[/FONT]
That's a short bit of exposition. (Let's assume Clyde "knows" all of that.)
[FONT=Georgia, serif]Clyde walked into the room. [/FONT][FONT=Georgia, serif]Snakes draped the chandeliers. [/FONT][FONT=Georgia, serif] Why in the world would his mother decorate the living room with a bunch of snakes? Did the argument with dad have anything to do with it?[/FONT]
That's introspection.
(Since I'm coming up with this example on the spot, it's probably suboptimal in ways. The introspection is a bit melodramatic. Two questions? I think one would be better? Maybe "His mother had decorated the living room with a bunch of snakes. Did the argument with dad have anything to do with it?"? Anyway, that's irrelevant.)
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Lol, at this point I remembered that I have two books and a few articles that answer my question.
Okay, I've read those sources and they don't really answer it.
Anyway, when you're dealing with past events (that the character is aware of), how do you decide whether to render them as regular narrative or as introspection?
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