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Hello. I just joined the board, so I hope this is the appropriate forum for my question. It's plot-related, but erotica-specific.
I've been writing fanfiction for about six months now, and I've started working on my first work of original erotic fiction. I'm about 20,000 words in.
Part of the plot involves one of the main characters going through a very bad patch (drug addiction) after being split up from the other main character (emotionally and location-wise.)
There's not going to be much happy sex during this period. There is the potential for some unhappy sex between him and other minor characters.
My question is this: am I shooting myself in the foot, by essentially having a depressing bit in the middle of my story? Worse, a depressing bit with no sex? It's essential to the plot, but I have to wonder how much angst people will tolerate in their erotica before ditching it and moving on (even if there is a reconciliation and a happy ending.)
Thanks for any thoughts you might have.
~chasingriver
I've been writing fanfiction for about six months now, and I've started working on my first work of original erotic fiction. I'm about 20,000 words in.
Part of the plot involves one of the main characters going through a very bad patch (drug addiction) after being split up from the other main character (emotionally and location-wise.)
There's not going to be much happy sex during this period. There is the potential for some unhappy sex between him and other minor characters.
My question is this: am I shooting myself in the foot, by essentially having a depressing bit in the middle of my story? Worse, a depressing bit with no sex? It's essential to the plot, but I have to wonder how much angst people will tolerate in their erotica before ditching it and moving on (even if there is a reconciliation and a happy ending.)
Thanks for any thoughts you might have.
~chasingriver