Chain, chain, chain, chain of haiku fools

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Who we really are
unmasked, unmarked, reflection
remarkable soul
 

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Remarkable soul
wonderful, wonderous whim
majestic unlearned
 

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Eludes the mysterious
musical notes, spaces scaled
dawns early bright light.
 

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dawn's early bright light
horizontal viewer found
eclipsed morning star.
 

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eclipsed morning star
with a silver crescent moon
sun scares them away
 

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foolish, not mushrooms
that are poisoned one would hope
avoid that toadstool
 

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Come beneath the fern
ledge under rainbowed stone cliff
coal miner's delight
 

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Coal miner's delight
Black diamonds under the ground
Tunnels speak its name
 

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Bated breath listens
behind a locked door’s chasm,
awaiting her sob
 

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Where is my shadow?
Now that the sun shines
awaits me at night
 
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[NOTE: Slight change to last line to make it 5 syllables]

awaits me at night
stalking me in the darkness
it is my shadow