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my name is hannah
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Heretogether
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B*tchslap rejection
Um if you're feeling bad about yourself, check this out...don't think anyone's ever hated my stuff more.
I had to prod this agent after she'd had my full for 3 months: Shady Lane: I'm sorry about the delay in getting back to you. Now that have had a chance to take a look at your book, I am going to have to pass. The voice and the plot are not strong enough to grab and hold the reader's attention. I kept thinking, "so where are we going with this?" and that's not good. You have to add some element to the plot that make it more compelling. And at least one character has to be truly sympathetic, and I did not find that to be the case with any of them. I guess the book is just not for me. Maybe another agent will feel differently. Not to be a snark, but there are quite a few grammar issues in this letter. I'm not upset about it. I just laughed, mumbled, "oh shit!" and let it go.
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'Twas but a dream of thee
El Jefe
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Shady -- I know this might not be what you want to hear, but as someone who writes rejections regularly, there's a wealth of stuff to look at and think about in that letter, grammar issues or not...and NO ONE writes a personal rejection without actually meaning to be helpful.
Or we can just have a martini and you can send it to the next one.
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Banned
Join Date: Aug 2005
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MacAllister deserves to be banned for giving a minor alcohol.
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Banned
Join Date: Aug 2005
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Oh, and forgetting I was in the ban-pit for a tad longer than I asked.
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Li'l Rug Bug
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Arkham Asylum
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yikes. thanks for sharing--that is very brave. sometimes other agents do see prose differently, though.
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Teaching, Learning, Loving
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Look up!
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I've heard of much worse rejections. This agent requested a full, and the complaints are fixable.
I think you're on to something. ![]() ETA: I just got a partial rejection where the agent gave no feedback and misspelled the title of my book. So there.
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fiddle-dee-dee
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Behind you! Boo.
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My heart's a battleground
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Florida
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That's a very personal rejection. He could have just said, "Thanks but not thanks" and sent you on your merry way. Feedback like that is pretty rare. In any case, good luck on your next submission!
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'Twas but a dream of thee
El Jefe
Join Date: Feb 2005
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Ursula K. LeGuin's rejection letter for Left Hand of Darkness
(Which won both a Hugo and a Nebula, when it was eventually published.)
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practical experience, FTW
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Shady: ![]() ![]() ![]() She cared enough to give you good feedback: it must be worth the time she took to read it and comment! |
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my name is hannah
Join Date: Mar 2007
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My heart's a battleground
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Huh?
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It should give everyone hope. Hang in there, Shady.
Last edited by Azure Skye; 10-23-2007 at 05:56 AM. Reason: Because cheap wine makes me stupid. |
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my name is hannah
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Haha, no worries, guys. I just posted it for your entertainment. I'm not upset/angry about it.
I know the ms in question needs work...but it's one I'm currently despising and not in the mood to work on AT ALL. So I know I'm definitely to blame, and I did send a very nice email back thanking her for her time and comments. So no worries there.
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YOUNG ADULT BOOKS: BREAK--Simon Pulse, 2009 BUY IT INVINCIBLE SUMMER--Simon Pulse, 2011 BUY IT GONE, GONE, GONE--Coming APRIL 17th, 2012, Simon Pulse BUY ITTEETH--Coming JANUARY 1ST, 2013, Simon Pulse -- MIDDLE GRADE BOOKS: ZOMBIE TAG--Coming DECEMBER 20th, 2011, Roaring Brook Press BUY IT MARCO IMPOSSIBLE--Coming MARCH 2013, Roaring Brook Press
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'Twas but a dream of thee
El Jefe
Join Date: Feb 2005
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And if you guys haven't read Slushkiller yet (from a then-acquiring editor at Tor) -- Get thee hence and read!
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I see you!
SuperModerator
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Midwest
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Empirical storm troopers? Reeking havoc? LOL I'm changing my avatar to read "Smelly chaos" I swear... Sorry about the rejection, Shady.
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Chivalry ain't dead
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Home. Work. Home. You know the drill.
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Wow. There was some ugly stuff in there but that's what we throw ourselves into. I've got to say that you're taking this with more maturity then I would, and I'm 39! Outside of the martini offer (I'll gladly drink that for you), you've got a slough of folks here that can turn you onto any fixes, or tell you that the agent was whacked! Keep hammering out the stuff; you're libel to be a solid, published author decades before me and many others.
Pike
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my name is hannah
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Haha, thanks, darlin. I hate feeling like a crybaby
![]() It's no big deal. Just leaves me free for DREAM AGENT *angelic sparkly chorus*
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YOUNG ADULT BOOKS: BREAK--Simon Pulse, 2009 BUY IT INVINCIBLE SUMMER--Simon Pulse, 2011 BUY IT GONE, GONE, GONE--Coming APRIL 17th, 2012, Simon Pulse BUY ITTEETH--Coming JANUARY 1ST, 2013, Simon Pulse -- MIDDLE GRADE BOOKS: ZOMBIE TAG--Coming DECEMBER 20th, 2011, Roaring Brook Press BUY IT MARCO IMPOSSIBLE--Coming MARCH 2013, Roaring Brook Press
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Tortilla di Patate
Join Date: May 2007
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I'm so confused, Shady. I thought you got a glowing review from an agent and were about to sign with her. Isn't that the "Chrsitmastime" revision request in your sig?
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my name is hannah
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![]() Only if she likes my revision! It's sort of an egg/basket sort of thing. Quote:
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has finally arrived
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Interesting - I just linked my husband to that rejection of the Left Hand of Darkness, and he said he completely agrees with the points it made. I wouldn't go that far, but Left Hand is not exactly my cup of tea.
So it really depends on where you're coming from and what you like, I guess. |
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Hearts the furrily challenged.
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Eek, that is a... strong reaction (which is possibly good? hmmm?), but it's only one person's reaction, so. *shrugs* Think about the advice, then see if it can be applied. (And I am still keeping my fingers crossed for Dream Agent!
)...the rejection for Left Hand of Darkness makes me cringe. D: |
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practical experience, FTW
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'Twas but a dream of thee
El Jefe
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You just have to find the right place for the good book.
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blue eyed floozy
Join Date: May 2007
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huevos
look, shady, at least you have the balls to send the query off. i have been "honing" a query since mid september. how is that for pathetic?--s6
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