Beta wanted for fantasy WIP

Purenightshade · 09-06-2007, 06:55 PM

Ok, So I have 51,088 words of a fantasy novel in progress. Half way to my goal of 100,000! Anyways, I was hoping someone would be interested in reading it to let me know if it;s at all readable, if the characters seem real enough, and such.

It's the story of ten college students who find themselves accidentally transported to a new world. They become caught in the middle of a conflict that has been going on for hundreds of years. Sword is pitted against Sorcery in a struggle for dominance of the the world of Keverynn. Their arrival is the trigger to an ancient prophecy. Will sword or sorcery triumph? Will Keverynn be returned to a peaceful state or will it be forever plunged into darkness?

09-06-2007, 06:55 PM	#1
Purenightshade New Fish; Learning About Thick Skin Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 11	Beta wanted for fantasy WIP Ok, So I have 51,088 words of a fantasy novel in progress. Half way to my goal of 100,000! Anyways, I was hoping someone would be interested in reading it to let me know if it;s at all readable, if the characters seem real enough, and such. It's the story of ten college students who find themselves accidentally transported to a new world. They become caught in the middle of a conflict that has been going on for hundreds of years. Sword is pitted against Sorcery in a struggle for dominance of the the world of Keverynn. Their arrival is the trigger to an ancient prophecy. Will sword or sorcery triumph? Will Keverynn be returned to a peaceful state or will it be forever plunged into darkness? __________________ 'Angels of the Night' - Current word count: 51,088 'Sword and Sorcery' - Current word count: 48,472

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