To see if a book is good...

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... you take the first sentence of every chapter, then list them. Finally, you read the sentences.

According to some old advice I got when I was really, really young, you can tell the quality of a book by its first sentences.

Regardless of whether it's true: it's still fun! So let's try :)

Here's mine :)

[FONT=&quot]P: When she finally reached her house and pulled herself behind the door, she could barely stand from the tremors and crying.

1: [/FONT][FONT=&quot]Oh snap.

2: [/FONT][FONT=&quot]First of all, do your research.

3: [/FONT][FONT=&quot]In the bushes behind the rip—that’s where I always sat.

4: [/FONT][FONT=&quot]I gaped at the creature, my muscles twitching beneath my skin.

5. [/FONT][FONT=&quot]I expected I would be disoriented passing through the rip, but when I became conscious of the other side, my mind was the sharpest it had ever been.

6: [/FONT][FONT=&quot]Loud noises stunned them—that much I learned from Inaris.

7: [/FONT][FONT=&quot]He was right about one thing; the little shadow annoyances didn’t stop trying to test my boundaries.

8: [/FONT][FONT=&quot]He certainly didn’t look peaceful—from what I could understand about his expressions, given his face was similar to a human’s.

9: [/FONT][FONT=&quot]The shadow tribe was nothing like I expected it.

10: [/FONT][FONT=&quot]Three shadows guarded the cave.

11: [/FONT][FONT=&quot]My first instinct was to run, but when he didn’t acknowledge my presence, I frowned and made a circle around him.

12: [/FONT][FONT=&quot]I could do nothing but listen to him as he lived through terrible fears.[/FONT]
 

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Cool!
1. Ardea staggered over the waste lands.
2. Five thousand years ago, blood dripped from Firenzia's lips to her chin over her bare breasts.
3. Before the precise teeth of Phenthregaas had divested Ikarias of her natal cord, the machinations of sorcery had distorted the destiny of another, older child.
4. Phenthregaas had smelled Rukh but the odor came muted as if one saw the sun through fog.
5. Lorian stirred in Chaenz' arms.
6. Dreams in ruins, those little projects seemed to last longer if Firenzia didn't rush a good thing.
7. "An interesting name for a picklock princess."
8. "Damn that scaly beast," Aria muttered through clenched teeth.
9. A slow arpeggio of pipes and a lyre strummed in with tambours and dumbeks, setting heartbeats in a slow steady fire.
10. Aria breathed in the heady deep summer scents of the black raspberry bushes, the spiced fern, the whole lushness of the season.
11. Dressing quickly on Chaenz' orders, Aria snuck glances at the unconscious young Amazon hanging like a slaughtered lamb.
12. Ikarias spat out the rain and mud splattered into her mouth by the violent storm's passage.
13. "F*cking bitch!" Firenzia cursed, whether at the Half-Dragon or the mad assassin, none could tell.
14. Synestra had missed the petite assassin.
15. 'Read my flesh', the book urged Aria.
16. Aria stood still, caught off guard by Khymera.
17. Pale hair hung down below her veil, white as the moonlight under which they traveled.
18. Standing in the crowd, watching this spectacle, Aria could not remain quiet any longer.
19. Calming down, Aria pondered Ikarias' words as she sat in the common room.
20. "Ikarias, get off her!"
21. Pushing the bartender aside, Ikarias grabbed a bottle of brandy.
22. Blinded, Ikarias felt like someone had thrust her face first into Haephestus' forge, though the injury was low on her list of things to set right.
23. Renzi nodded, bowed even deeper in return, graciously answering, "I shall tell my Mistress of your reply. Thank you."
24. Ikarias froze.
25. "Ikarias! Mind your manners," Aria knew where Ikarias' focus was as they climbed to the attic.
26. Ikarias slumped against the wall.
27. Ikarias' dearest beloved, mangy ex-lover hummed happily enjoying the little hobby of removing her skin
28. Killing pressure existed so deep, even the sun never made it to the lowest part of the indigo sea.
29. Despite her new confidence in walking and the return of her powers, B'sylla still felt uneasy.
30. Ikarias' eyebrows rose when she saw the familiar figure enter the hall.
31. At Firenzia's will, the red flying carpet slowed at the view of a castle jutting from a mountainside.
32. Make her as heartless as she is to others.
 

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LOL I'm game. Actually I have played this game by myself.

1.Hard work could keep a fellow's mind off being doomed, but anyone got tired after a while.

2.Though Vezanidi needed to nap during the day, she did not always sleep well at night.

3.The small river flowed as steady as time.

4.From his hillside vantage Radovin squinted into the bright morning sunlight, shading his eyes with one hand while he widened an opening in the leafy weeds with the other.

5.Jerevan, Gambasor, and Langalen stalked toward the hazel thicket at the base of a steep rise.

6.With the setting of the sun, all shadows had merged.

7.Birds start their day well before sunrise.

8."So, what do you think, Nechebar?"

9.There was more light and life in the tent when Ottavar awoke on this morning, the third since their arrival at the Summermeet.

10.Radovin was aware of what went on around him.

11.Ottavar had the oddest sensation of being watched.

12.Sleep refused to return after Ottavar's cryptic dream revelation.

13.Sunlight poured in the open east end of the small tent, warming the pair who sat cross-legged on woven mats.

14.Everyone was obliged to don appropriate garb for this very formal occasion.

15.Balekara finished addressing the spirits and settled back onto a low bench of flat stones that had been built there for her comfort.

16.The Council members welcomed an opportunity to air their thoughts freely, unconstrained by the rules governing an official meeting.

17.Radovin followed Ottavar into the tent, twisting his neck to see everything.

18.Zhamouta crept through Radovin like mist off a glacier.

19.The next thing Ottavar knew, someone was frantically slapping the front flap, calling for Hacaben.

20.Radovin carried another armload of wood from the dwindling heap behind the tent of his own band to the hearth in front of it.

21.Later that afternoon, slow drumming announced the onset of Bodisar's burial rites.

22.Ottavar and Radovin arose well after dawn, and enjoyed a late breakfast.

23."Here they come!"

24.In spite of recent unsettling events, the gathering had a bright mood.

25.The night progressed in the usual way of all-night celebrations.

26.Hacaben could not be approached until after he'd had a good nap, said the man at the Greatbuck band's camp.

27.Radovin ran slam into Odazhan, who was just entering.

28.Ottavar shook his head and snorted as hard as he could.

29.Pachaba woke, moaning, "Ohh, my head...ohhh, I can't move, help me, somebody!"

30.He heard a woman's voice softly crooning, felt a gentle hand stroke his head.

31.It was hard to get up, but he had to pee.

32.Ottavar tried to sleep beyond a brief after-breakfast nap, but trivial disturbing thoughts kept pulling him back.

33.Damagi informed the awed, silent watchers that the danger was over.