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*Short notice*
Genre: Fiction
Feedback: Absolutely anything and everything! Constructive criticism would be great
Publishing: It's for a contest.
Credentials: Anyone. The short story touches on religion so I would really like to how people react to it. I would usually ask people I know to read it, but since it does involve religion I don't really want any feelings that should be directed to the speaker of the story instead directed at me. And I'm not really comfortable discussing religion with my family.
If anyone could help me out, send me a PM as soon as possible and I will send you a copy of the MS. It would be greatly appreciated. Shouldn't take very long at all to read, so if anyone has time let me know.
I'm a 17-old first-year student in University. If that hasn't immediately turned you off to reading it well, read on...
I really think I've done something better here than I've ever done. A lot of thought went into symbolism, word choice, layout, and a lot of stuff I usually haven't incorporated -- at least, intentionally. I would like to know if it is coherent and if it is any good to someone other than me!
There's an imminent deadline so I would like a second opinion as soon as possible, if possible! Please let me know!
Genre: Fiction
Feedback: Absolutely anything and everything! Constructive criticism would be great
Publishing: It's for a contest.
Credentials: Anyone. The short story touches on religion so I would really like to how people react to it. I would usually ask people I know to read it, but since it does involve religion I don't really want any feelings that should be directed to the speaker of the story instead directed at me. And I'm not really comfortable discussing religion with my family.
If anyone could help me out, send me a PM as soon as possible and I will send you a copy of the MS. It would be greatly appreciated. Shouldn't take very long at all to read, so if anyone has time let me know.
I'm a 17-old first-year student in University. If that hasn't immediately turned you off to reading it well, read on...
I really think I've done something better here than I've ever done. A lot of thought went into symbolism, word choice, layout, and a lot of stuff I usually haven't incorporated -- at least, intentionally. I would like to know if it is coherent and if it is any good to someone other than me!
There's an imminent deadline so I would like a second opinion as soon as possible, if possible! Please let me know!
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