How to slow down - Absolute Write Water Cooler

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08-06-2009, 08:16 PM	#1
Rowdymama Dogzilla Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 261	How to slow down About the only really helpful critiques I've received on my work amounts to this: "In this (scene, passage, etc.) I felt rushed." When there's a lot of tension going on, I do have a tendency to hurry. Does anyone have any hints about how to slow down? Should I add emotion, internal dialogue, what? Thanks for any help. __________________ God Squad Member http://pygmypress.com Writing, Editing, Mentoring Services Blog at http://susanrand.wordpress.com

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