But to add to my other posts, I'm talking about paying markets here. ANY paying markets. It's important to understand that the only difference between the writer who sells repeatedly to professional markets, or the writer who wins literary awards, or the writer who sells repeatedly to token-paying markets (these days) is style and genre--not skill level. For example, there are some excellent horror writers out there with very few professional markets to work with, and so they may have few professional credits, if any. Same goes for writers of high fantasy, sword and sorcery, or space opera.
I realize that appears to contradict my statement that pay rate determines skill level. But it in fact does not. To clarify: A higher pay rate often attracts better writers, but some writers don't have much of a professional market for their style or genre of fiction. These writers submit to token-paying markets (making the competition among those markets that much more difficult). See, no contradiction. Cool beans, huh?
Very cool beans, until I recall I write sword-and-sorcery. Although I dabble with other genres, as well. To date I've only 'sold' one story to a non-paying market, but there are a lot of stories I haven't sold yet that might go to a non-paying market eventually. I don't like the thought, really--writing a short story can take a lot out of me, and I'd like a few bucks to show for it, even if it isn't much. If I wanted to post fiction without being paid, I'd use my Fictionpress account.
That said, there are some very lovely nonpaying 'zines out there. If other authors want to appear in them, more power (and publication credits) to them. It's just not the way I work.
Good stuff guys. One of the best threads I've read on these boards.
Wow. This is all very new to me. I've been submitting to the so-called "literary" journals, very few of which pay. If you search on Duotrope for "literary" and "non-paying markets," you'll find prestigious names like the Alaska Quarterly Review, Conjunctions and McSweeney's Internet Tendency — in short, magazines I would kill to be in. Most of them are funded by a college or university and have a tiny subscription base; hence the lack of pay. But they are very important as pro credits for anyone who wants to teach fiction writing, publish a novel, etc. (Most are print journals, but not all.)
Ironically, my one acceptance was paid ($100). But it was from a relatively obscure journal that (per Duotrope) accepts a full 11 percent of submissions. The ones I named above accept less than 1 percent.
I'm not trying to make a living from fiction, since I already make a living churning out nonfiction to fit the demands of a market. My priority is to get my words in print (or online in a well-read pub). But since I sometimes do submit to genre markets (like Strange Horizons), this discussion is really helpful to me.
Now, if only someone could tell me how to find a midlevel literary market I could actually get accepted by, paying or not ... sigh.
i havent had anything accepted anywhere yet. two stories were rejected this week, within a few hours of each other. the first one really hurt, the second hardly registered.
i really want to get my stuff out to readers but i am still only sending to paying markets, although the payrates are getting very very low.
i havent had anything accepted anywhere yet. two stories were rejected this week, within a few hours of each other. the first one really hurt, the second hardly registered.
i really want to get my stuff out to readers but i am still only sending to paying markets, although the payrates are getting very very low.
Well, sometimes it takes a while. The first hurdle is learning how to write in the way editors want. The biggest hurdle, and one many writers never clear, is learning to write what editors want.
I think it helps to remember that even some great writers took a while to clear both hurdles. William Saroyan pulled in roughly 4,000 rejections before he wrote and sold The Daring Young Man on the Flying Trapeze.
Erskine Caldwell didn't fare much better, and had a huge suitcase stuffed with rejection slips before making his first sale. He said tehy made a great bonfire. once he did make a sale.
Both of them did fine, once they got the hang of it.
Unlike Robert, I think, outside of format and grammar, critique groups are a horrible idea for most writers. I have seen writers, a tiny few, helped by a grup, but even most of those wouold have, I believe, succeeded faster without the group. And for every writer I've seen helped, I've seen nine harmed, sometimes irreparably.
If critique groups really helped as much as many believe, it seems to me a higher percentage of writer in such groups should go on to become selling writers, but it very rarely happens.
If you look at the sheer number of stories most successful short story writers wrote in the beginning, it becomes obvious that there wasn't enough time to send a fraction of these stories through groups. A prolific writer can often write ten stories in the time it takes for one story to go through the "critique" process.
In fact, William Saroyan broke in by determining to write a story a day for thirty days. Somewhere around day twenty, Trapeze came out of his typewriter. Had he been sending those stories thorugh a group, Trapeze wouldn't have been written for years, if ever.
If you must be critiqued, find one or two or three readers who actually know what it takes to make a story of the kind you write publishable, which means those who can either do it themselves, or those who have some experience buying stories. Even a bestselling SF writer probably can't tell you squat about what it takes to make a literary short story publishable.
Just about all the writers in the average critique group are going to know less than you do, and can't write anything resembling a publishable story, but they'll be happy to tell you what's wrong with yours, and exactly how to fix it.
Writers aside, I've also seen nine good stories completely ruined for each I've seen helped, again aside from grammar and format.
It's easy to say you have to be careful who to listen to, but a writer who knows who to listen to is usually a heck of a lot more selective in who he lets read his stories in the first place, and will probably get plenty of good help from the editors he submits stories to. If not, he'll search high and low for a couple of readers who can actually do what it is he wants to learn.
Format and grammar are, I believe, important to a first sale.
I suggest getting a few stories critiqued on the side, but certainly a writer shouldn't send every story through a critique group or you'd be waiting for years to get much of anything sold.
There are a few common elements that can be learned through the critiquing process that I feel can benefit beginning writers: Showing rather than telling (a big one that gets constantly harped on), good grammar (of course), avoiding passive writing, avoiding over use of exposition, and avoiding weak character development (on occasion). Yes, there is always crappy advice to be found mixed in with the good advice, but I think most writers will get clued in to the common elements that better writers employ, and it can give a floundering writer a needed boost.
You said you believe many writers have been harmed by critique groups. I won't dispute that, since I have no hard data either way, but I will ask this out of curiosity: In what ways do you feel they were harmed? Irreparable damage suggests these writers learned faulty techniques. Have you noticed one or more common misconceptions perpetuated within critique groups concerning techniques, or is the damage more random and general? I have not seen any common misconceptions myself that would lead to a writer learning permanent faulty techniques.
I have seen many, many writers harmed by critique groups, and the harm ranges from mild to irreparable. The mild harm is when a writer gets in, realizes his mistake after a few months, and gets out. More severe harm occurs when a good writer gets into a critique group, has his good writing, or rather good storytelling, turned into slop by listening to bad advice, gets lost in the maze of advice, doesn't know how the heck he's supposed to write anymore, and spends years trying to regain what he had before he ever allowed a story to get critiqued.
The irreparable harm is done, and I've seen it happen many times, when a darned good writer gets so lost and discouraged by tons of conflicting advice that he stops writing altogether. This is not an uncommon occurence. It's been my experience that good writers usually quit faster and more often than bad writers.
Part of the problems is that no more than ten percent or so of those in critique groups have a clue about what it takes to make a story publishable. Pubishable is seldom about good or bad, showing or telling, passive sentences in media res, or any one of a dozen other "rules" that critique groups use to turn a good story into slop. Sometimes, in some stories, tell works better than show, passive says exactly what should be said, and in media res is a horrible way to begin.
Which gives rise to one of the seemingly sensible but biggest myths out there. . .if enough readers tell you something is wrong, change it. This is horrible advice, almost guaranteed to screw up any writer. If nine writers in a group tell you something is wrong, and one tells you it's right, you'll usually be better off listening to the one because that's about the percentage of writers in any group who really knows what he's talking about.
The lousy part of it all is that the writers being harmed the most are almost always the ones who will, for months on end, swear they're being helped the most. They keep saying this right up to the day when discouragement overpowers blind faith, and they either stop writing, or, if very lucky, go away and stop listening to bad advice.
I think the biggest problem on the group side may be that outside of editors and most pro writers in your genre, almost no one reads a manuscript with the same eye and attitude they use to read an already published story. Thwe job of a critique group is to find out what's wrong and tell the writer how to fix it, and they will, by God, find out what's wrong, even if nothing is, and tell you how to fix it, even if the "fix" breaks everything meaningful about the story.
If you want to try an interesting experiment, find a large critique group, preferably an in person group simply because I don't like posting anyone else's writing online, and give them a story tp critique. But not just any story. Copy one by a famous writer, put the name of an unpublished writer on it, (Make the writer up, if you like), and ask the group to give it an honest critique, including their opinion of whether or not it's publishable.
I've done this many times, including with groups that had well-pubished writers as members, and the story always gets shredded. On only a couple of occasions has any member of any group said that the story might be publishable as is.
I haven't done this to be mean, but in an attempt to get groups to understand that they do read a manuscript in a different way, and usually tear stories apart needlessly, and in ways that simply do not matter.
The biggest problem on the writer side may be that, because so many groups are out there, and so many new writers encourage involvment in them, the writer tries to substitute a group for things that would help, such as writing classes and workshops taught by top editors and pro writer who specialize in your genre. Sometimes you really do get what you pay for, and a writer is a hundred times better off spending some money to find people who really know what they're doing.
I also think a writer is better off with no help at all, other than reading much, writing often, and submitting everything, than he is with the wrong help. He'll improve faster, sell quicker, and be much happier than he will be after the typical group experience.
All this presupposes that the writer has some talent in the first place, of course, but then again, most members of most critique groups will never sell anything, anywhere, for any amount of money.
I saw the conversation and feel passionately about it, but i don't want to get involved in a debate. I can't see how one would be useful here. It'll just come down to 'i think this' versus 'i think that.'If someone sees this conversation and feels passionately about the subject, they can post.
Your view on critique groups is interesting. I don't actually have enough experience to try to oppose your argument. It would take a writer who has been involved in the critiquing process much longer than I have and who is more committed to it than I am. If someone sees this conversation and feels passionately about the subject, they can post.
On Critters, the claim is made that those who are part of the group are more likely to get published, and stats are revealed to prove the case. Do you dispute this claim and the statistics that are shown?
I've gotten some good advice on a few stories there, and I've rejected some advice that I felt wasn't useful. For me, it was a positive experience. That's the extent of my experience with critique groups. Again, some other writer with greater experience would be better qualified to offer an opposing argument on this topic
On Critters, the claim is made that those who are part of the group are more likely to get published, and stats are revealed to prove the case. Do you dispute this claim and the statistics that are shown?
I've gotten some good advice on a few stories there, and I've rejected some advice that I felt wasn't useful. For me, it was a positive experience. That's the extent of my experience with critique groups. Again, some other writer with greater experience would be better qualified to offer an opposing argument on this topic
If there's an exception to the paying market rule, it's college literary magazines, but an awful lot of these pay, too. Not much, usually, but the better ones do pay something, and some pay reasonably well.
I am impressed to see how many of them pay semi-pro rates. But I'd still rather be published in Conjunctions (which pays zip) than something called Space Squid or Vestal Review (which pay semi-pro). They may be great publications, and I look forward to researching them and finding out, but I'm basing my submission order on a different (and equally superficial) factor: which journals have name recognition and turn up in the Pushcart Prizes anthology (and hence might impress an agent).
Right or wrong, money matters, and teh fact taht soemone is willing to pay you for your writing is much more impressive than a prize like Pushcart.
I can't agree for my case, because I know my one (paid) publication is worth next to nothing where an agent is concerned. If it were the New Yorker, that would be another story.