Teens Writing For Teens (v2) - Page 420

Elusive · Today, 09:55 AM

lawl Go Karla!

KC36 · Today, 09:58 AM

Haha thanks Elu!

I am jumping the gun though. I still need to finish 1 last blurb

I have the premise in my head. Just gotta write it down

KC36 · Today, 10:03 AM

AH!! Did not realize you can import your blog to Facebook Notes!!

*cringes*

I've been copying/pasting for the past 3 weeks!

half.jaded · Today, 10:18 AM

I'm weak on ideas. I mean, I get lots of them but usually I decide they're not good enough and toss them.

Elusive · Today, 10:19 AM

I got my first SNI in a long time yesterday.

Have to see if it sticks around long enough to be written.

But for now I'm off to bed! Night, twifties!

KC36 · Today, 10:27 AM

Night Elu!!

Glorium · Today, 10:40 AM

Okay, so, since I took a nap today and my sleeping schedule is messed up, I'm pulling an all-nighter. I have to get up at 3 anyway, so it's not even like it matters.

TWO QUESTIONS

Quote:

Her bare legs scraped against the thick bristle of the growth, but the grating on her legs and the blood dripping from her small wounds was not enough to distract her.

Is that third-person limited?
Also, is it telling or showing?

KC36 · Today, 10:45 AM

That alone is 3rd limited because you're just following the girl's POV. I think it's showing. If you say.. She hurt herself on the thick bristle of the growth ... that is telling.

Glorium · Today, 10:59 AM

Oh okay, I think that makes sense.

xD

Snap, my sister is home. Guess I'll see you guys later. Again. Blah.

Lol.

Bye!

KC36 · Today, 11:01 AM

Bye Glor!

KC36 · Today, 11:03 AM

Jade you still there? I keep wondering where you live

Because I think you are 14 hours ahead? Or am I technically 10 hours ahead..

half.jaded · Today, 11:07 AM

I'm here. ^^

I'm fourteen hours ahead, I think. Twelve to fourteen hours ahead. I'm not so sure. oO

KC36 · Today, 11:08 AM

It's 12:38 a.m. here

ETA: Wowowow, I forgot that it's a 24 hour day.. I was thinking in terms of 12 *facepalm*

It's late lol

half.jaded · Today, 11:13 AM

O.O

It's 2:42 PM here. Oh noes. I'm awake while the rest of the world is asleep!! xO

Mad Hatter · Today, 11:24 AM

It's only 10:54 here...

KC36 · Today, 11:24 AM

Haha, it's okay. Oh, and technically I am 10 hours ahead

I know Leasie is 13 hours ahead (technically 11 hours behind).

*is still giddy that she wrote all her blurbs!!*

I am not tired at all yet. I had rootbeer earlier. Although my eyes are starting to feel heavy. Sleep will overcome me in the next half hour for sure lol

MH, your avvie scares me lol. I try to look away, but it's so scary I am fixated on it. If that makes any sense. Once again, it is late.

KC36 · Today, 11:27 AM

Mini Teaser: "Our new couple nickname will be TnT. 'Cause you and me together are dynamite; we're smoking hot. You and me. TnT." - says a character in one of my new ideas!

half.jaded · Today, 11:27 AM

Love your avatar, Hatter. ^^ It gave me a little spark. Maybe a new idea? *crosses fingers*

half.jaded · Today, 11:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KC36

Mini Teaser: "Our new couple nickname will be TnT. 'Cause you and me together are dynamite; we're smoking hot. You and me. TnT." - says a character in one of my new ideas!

And that's adorable. xD It's quotable.

KC36 · Today, 11:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by half.jaded

And that's adorable. xD It's quotable.

Haha, very quotable!

I don't know how I come up with these things

Mad Hatter · Today, 11:37 AM

thanks jaded. run with the idea

and that's really cute KC

half.jaded · Today, 11:50 AM

My brain is fizzing. I can't write any more than 500 words today. By the way, did I ever mention I'm horrible at photoshop?

lilymeade · Today, 01:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KC36

Haha, very quotable!

I don't know how I come up with these things

I go crazy when I come up with really funny and/or catchy phrases. It's just a "Wow, I really just might be an awesome author" moment.

Today, 09:55 AM	#10476
Elusive What happened to my LIFE?! Join Date: May 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 2,447	lawl Go Karla! __________________ Querying:: The Boy Who Stole My ~~Heart~~ Car - 54K Writing: Fire and Ice (working title) - [word count censored due to horrifying nature] Epiphanies and Christmas Lists \| TWFT

Today, 09:58 AM	#10477
KC36 YA contemporary romance writer, yo Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,753	Haha thanks Elu! I am jumping the gun though. I still need to finish 1 last blurb I have the premise in my head. Just gotta write it down __________________ Ramblings of a Writer: Blog WIP Love Square: 44K (revamped version: 44K) To Find Love: 11K Rules NOT to Fall in Love: 8K Glitchers: 9K SNI* Double Life of a Geek and a Heartbreaker He's Mine! Letters A Tale of Two Hearts Take Me or Break Me Do Re Mi's on Love *Multiple perspective novels which will be my specialty

Today, 10:03 AM	#10478
KC36 YA contemporary romance writer, yo Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,753	AH!! Did not realize you can import your blog to Facebook Notes!! cringes I've been copying/pasting for the past 3 weeks! __________________ Ramblings of a Writer: Blog WIP Love Square: 44K (revamped version: 44K) To Find Love: 11K Rules NOT to Fall in Love: 8K Glitchers: 9K SNI* Double Life of a Geek and a Heartbreaker He's Mine! Letters A Tale of Two Hearts Take Me or Break Me Do Re Mi's on Love *Multiple perspective novels which will be my specialty

Today, 10:18 AM	#10479
half.jaded AW Addict Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: The moon - cheese is goooood. Posts: 149	I'm weak on ideas. I mean, I get lots of them but usually I decide they're not good enough and toss them. __________________ A writer is congenitally unable to tell the truth and that is why we call what he writes fiction. ~ William Faulkner Writing is 1 percent inspiration, and 99 percent elimination. ~ Louise Brooks Catharsis: 1st draft: Done at 44k by word processor standards First revision: 31k of an estimated 50k One scene from Catharsis:Any form of criticism (except flaming) appreciated.

Today, 10:19 AM	#10480
Elusive What happened to my LIFE?! Join Date: May 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 2,447	I got my first SNI in a long time yesterday. Have to see if it sticks around long enough to be written. But for now I'm off to bed! Night, twifties! __________________ Querying:: The Boy Who Stole My ~~Heart~~ Car - 54K Writing: Fire and Ice (working title) - [word count censored due to horrifying nature] Epiphanies and Christmas Lists \| TWFT

Today, 10:27 AM	#10481
KC36 YA contemporary romance writer, yo Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,753	Night Elu!! __________________ Ramblings of a Writer: Blog WIP Love Square: 44K (revamped version: 44K) To Find Love: 11K Rules NOT to Fall in Love: 8K Glitchers: 9K SNI* Double Life of a Geek and a Heartbreaker He's Mine! Letters A Tale of Two Hearts Take Me or Break Me Do Re Mi's on Love *Multiple perspective novels which will be my specialty

Today, 10:45 AM	#10483
KC36 YA contemporary romance writer, yo Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,753	That alone is 3rd limited because you're just following the girl's POV. I think it's showing. If you say.. She hurt herself on the thick bristle of the growth ... that is telling. __________________ Ramblings of a Writer: Blog WIP Love Square: 44K (revamped version: 44K) To Find Love: 11K Rules NOT to Fall in Love: 8K Glitchers: 9K SNI* Double Life of a Geek and a Heartbreaker He's Mine! Letters A Tale of Two Hearts Take Me or Break Me Do Re Mi's on Love *Multiple perspective novels which will be my specialty

Today, 10:59 AM	#10484
Glorium Lost Addict Join Date: May 2009 Location: Colorado, Biotch Posts: 1,334	Oh okay, I think that makes sense. xD Snap, my sister is home. Guess I'll see you guys later. Again. Blah. Lol. Bye! __________________ Uncloud - Under Extensive Construction "What do you want me to do? Hand myself over to Vanguard? Let them scrape the stone out of my chest and spill my blood over the steps of the Clouded Altar?" - Callie Dobbler Genetic Fallacy - My Blog

Today, 11:01 AM	#10485
KC36 YA contemporary romance writer, yo Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,753	Bye Glor! __________________ Ramblings of a Writer: Blog WIP Love Square: 44K (revamped version: 44K) To Find Love: 11K Rules NOT to Fall in Love: 8K Glitchers: 9K SNI* Double Life of a Geek and a Heartbreaker He's Mine! Letters A Tale of Two Hearts Take Me or Break Me Do Re Mi's on Love *Multiple perspective novels which will be my specialty

Today, 11:03 AM	#10486
KC36 YA contemporary romance writer, yo Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,753	Jade you still there? I keep wondering where you live Because I think you are 14 hours ahead? Or am I technically 10 hours ahead.. __________________ Ramblings of a Writer: Blog WIP Love Square: 44K (revamped version: 44K) To Find Love: 11K Rules NOT to Fall in Love: 8K Glitchers: 9K SNI* Double Life of a Geek and a Heartbreaker He's Mine! Letters A Tale of Two Hearts Take Me or Break Me Do Re Mi's on Love *Multiple perspective novels which will be my specialty

Today, 11:07 AM	#10487
half.jaded AW Addict Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: The moon - cheese is goooood. Posts: 149	I'm here. ^^ I'm fourteen hours ahead, I think. Twelve to fourteen hours ahead. I'm not so sure. oO __________________ A writer is congenitally unable to tell the truth and that is why we call what he writes fiction. ~ William Faulkner Writing is 1 percent inspiration, and 99 percent elimination. ~ Louise Brooks Catharsis: 1st draft: Done at 44k by word processor standards First revision: 31k of an estimated 50k One scene from Catharsis:Any form of criticism (except flaming) appreciated.

Today, 11:08 AM	#10488
KC36 YA contemporary romance writer, yo Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,753	It's 12:38 a.m. here ETA: Wowowow, I forgot that it's a 24 hour day.. I was thinking in terms of 12 facepalm It's late lol __________________ Ramblings of a Writer: Blog WIP Love Square: 44K (revamped version: 44K) To Find Love: 11K Rules NOT to Fall in Love: 8K Glitchers: 9K SNI* Double Life of a Geek and a Heartbreaker He's Mine! Letters A Tale of Two Hearts Take Me or Break Me Do Re Mi's on Love *Multiple perspective novels which will be my specialty

Today, 11:13 AM	#10489
half.jaded AW Addict Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: The moon - cheese is goooood. Posts: 149	O.O It's 2:42 PM here. Oh noes. I'm awake while the rest of the world is asleep!! xO __________________ A writer is congenitally unable to tell the truth and that is why we call what he writes fiction. ~ William Faulkner Writing is 1 percent inspiration, and 99 percent elimination. ~ Louise Brooks Catharsis: 1st draft: Done at 44k by word processor standards First revision: 31k of an estimated 50k One scene from Catharsis:Any form of criticism (except flaming) appreciated.

Today, 11:24 AM	#10490
Mad Hatter AW Addict Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: California Posts: 121	It's only 10:54 here... __________________ Sixth Circle(supernatural YA)-Completed http://www.mortemtwins.blogspot.com Book Trailer: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=go7E_6FnmCY NaNo: http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/589584

Today, 11:24 AM	#10491
KC36 YA contemporary romance writer, yo Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,753	Haha, it's okay. Oh, and technically I am 10 hours ahead I know Leasie is 13 hours ahead (technically 11 hours behind). is still giddy that she wrote all her blurbs!! I am not tired at all yet. I had rootbeer earlier. Although my eyes are starting to feel heavy. Sleep will overcome me in the next half hour for sure lol MH, your avvie scares me lol. I try to look away, but it's so scary I am fixated on it. If that makes any sense. Once again, it is late. __________________ Ramblings of a Writer: Blog WIP Love Square: 44K (revamped version: 44K) To Find Love: 11K Rules NOT to Fall in Love: 8K Glitchers: 9K SNI* Double Life of a Geek and a Heartbreaker He's Mine! Letters A Tale of Two Hearts Take Me or Break Me Do Re Mi's on Love *Multiple perspective novels which will be my specialty

Today, 11:27 AM	#10492
KC36 YA contemporary romance writer, yo Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,753	Mini Teaser: "Our new couple nickname will be TnT. 'Cause you and me together are dynamite; we're smoking hot. You and me. TnT." - says a character in one of my new ideas! __________________ Ramblings of a Writer: Blog WIP Love Square: 44K (revamped version: 44K) To Find Love: 11K Rules NOT to Fall in Love: 8K Glitchers: 9K SNI* Double Life of a Geek and a Heartbreaker He's Mine! Letters A Tale of Two Hearts Take Me or Break Me Do Re Mi's on Love *Multiple perspective novels which will be my specialty

Today, 11:27 AM	#10493
half.jaded AW Addict Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: The moon - cheese is goooood. Posts: 149	Love your avatar, Hatter. ^^ It gave me a little spark. Maybe a new idea? crosses fingers __________________ A writer is congenitally unable to tell the truth and that is why we call what he writes fiction. ~ William Faulkner Writing is 1 percent inspiration, and 99 percent elimination. ~ Louise Brooks Catharsis: 1st draft: Done at 44k by word processor standards First revision: 31k of an estimated 50k One scene from Catharsis:Any form of criticism (except flaming) appreciated.

Today, 11:37 AM	#10496
Mad Hatter AW Addict Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: California Posts: 121	thanks jaded. run with the idea and that's really cute KC __________________ Sixth Circle(supernatural YA)-Completed http://www.mortemtwins.blogspot.com Book Trailer: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=go7E_6FnmCY NaNo: http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/589584

Today, 11:50 AM	#10497
half.jaded AW Addict Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: The moon - cheese is goooood. Posts: 149	My brain is fizzing. I can't write any more than 500 words today. By the way, did I ever mention I'm horrible at photoshop? __________________ A writer is congenitally unable to tell the truth and that is why we call what he writes fiction. ~ William Faulkner Writing is 1 percent inspiration, and 99 percent elimination. ~ Louise Brooks Catharsis: 1st draft: Done at 44k by word processor standards First revision: 31k of an estimated 50k One scene from Catharsis:Any form of criticism (except flaming) appreciated.

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