Old People Writing for Teens (Version 2)

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Kathleen42

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I'm no pro on the synopsis... but from what I understand (and I spend way too much time reading up on these things) you have more lee-way in a synopsis than you do a query as far as sharing that info. Recently I'm also seeing more and more that agents mention they want to know if a story has series potential - as long as first story can stand on it's own.

If it's me - I'd add something about the series - but I'm pretty sure there are more qualified opinion givers on this topic.

In a query letter you can mention series potential. I would not do it in a synopsis.
 

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You know...I've been thinking about that. He'll be old by then and I'll probably need some fresh meat anyway...plus I can get away with it when I'm senile I can be the little old lady booty pincher! Muahahahahahaha :D

Annie, that comment made my day! I could see us being arrested at book signing cuz Annie's gotten her Cougar Claws into some unsuspecting Dean lookalike! LOL
 

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LOL Maybe some...but there are some that are completely with it that love to call me "My girl Annie" Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww LMAO

All my grammy's friends are always asking about who I'm dating and I'm sure I have to "beat them off with a stick!"

I srsly want to say, "No, but I may start beating them on with a stick!"

Oh damn, that kinda went pervy didn't it?

Sighs, I get the geezers and the cubs but one decent guy my age. Nope!
 

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LMAO!


I have another question. Is it okay to use song titles in a book? My characters listen to a lot of music.
 

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See... people better able to answer this! ;)

lol I'm just guessing. The job of a query letter is to sell the agent on the concept and potential but the job of the synopsis is to provide them with a map of what you have created and to help them see how your plot holds up. If you included information about the series, the agent would likely assume it was in the book.
 

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Why can't this agent seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. They belong with meeeeeeeeeeeeee.

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Thanks,guys!

I've boiled the synopsis down to one page for the first book. I'm not mentioning that it's the beginning of a series.

My agent is out there and I will love and squeeze him/her,for they are MINE.

Forever.

They will love me or they will get the hose.

*deranged cackle*
 

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Het - You can totally slap, whack, hit people with a sack of bricks--whatever it takes. :tongue

By the way, random chapter has been inserted into SM, and I have one more chapter and one more read-through to go, and then I'll be ready for the final draft. Eek!!! :snoopy:
 

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Thanks,guys!

I've boiled the synopsis down to one page for the first book. I'm not mentioning that it's the beginning of a series.

My agent is out there and I will love and squeeze him/her,for they are MINE.

Forever.

They will love me or they will get the hose.

*deranged cackle*

"It puts the lotion in the basket!"
 

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I have had a very productive evening with ya ladies. I have threatened to slap people around, parried about bad advice, added all the agents I could find from my possible query list to my twitter, changed my twitter background, listened to my entire playlist... oh and I worked. I helped customers find the outfits of their dreams. How could I forget - my favorite - I was able to quote Jame Gumb - epic!

Notice - no writing occurred... whatsoever
 

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This thread ROCKS!

I can laugh,ask questions without feeling embarrassed,get good advice AND enjoy myself.

Jame Gumb is love!
 

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Wow. You learn something new every day.

If you go to ITANIMULLI.com, it brings up the NSA website.

Now... spell ITANIMULLI backwards.

:/
 

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Wow. You learn something new every day.

If you go to ITANIMULLI.com, it brings up the NSA website.

Now... spell ITANIMULLI backwards.

:/

thing to keep in mind with things like that is that someone else can register a domain and point to someone else's website.
 
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