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So, there's been this short fiction story idea that's been kicking around in my head for a while now. The story is essentially the time-honored cliche of "AI gains sentience and kills people", but told from the perspective of the AI itself, examining what would drive an artificial intelligence to do such an action.
There's just one problem. The way my AI was designed, it slowly evolves over time as it gains intelligence, and initially it is merely an ordinary computer. It's similar to "Flowers for Algernon", in that we see the protagonist's mind changing as the story goes on.
The problem is that I am writing from the perspective of what is essentially an alien intelligence. I don't want it to start thinking and talking like HAL 9000 as soon as it's switched on. However, a computer is essentially a complicated device for running programs. It doesn't think deep thoughts, it doesn't question its existence, and it doesn't keep a diary of what its day was like.
So, Absolute Write people, how should I go about writing the earlier chapters? How should I write the thought process of a computer? How should I clue people in that there's something more going inside its mind?
Any tips at all would be nice. I'm determined to write this thing.
There's just one problem. The way my AI was designed, it slowly evolves over time as it gains intelligence, and initially it is merely an ordinary computer. It's similar to "Flowers for Algernon", in that we see the protagonist's mind changing as the story goes on.
The problem is that I am writing from the perspective of what is essentially an alien intelligence. I don't want it to start thinking and talking like HAL 9000 as soon as it's switched on. However, a computer is essentially a complicated device for running programs. It doesn't think deep thoughts, it doesn't question its existence, and it doesn't keep a diary of what its day was like.
So, Absolute Write people, how should I go about writing the earlier chapters? How should I write the thought process of a computer? How should I clue people in that there's something more going inside its mind?
Any tips at all would be nice. I'm determined to write this thing.