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Old 02-14-2010, 04:19 PM   #1
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The Line of the Day--NO CRITTING
Okay, MTSers, I want to know your favorite line from your WIP. Nothing too revealing, of course--no spoilers!--but something fun and/or deep and/or profound and/or just something you really liked.

I'll start:

"Screw it, he thought, the whole world’s going to hell, why shouldn’t I? and he leaned in and kissed her on the lips in the shade of the palm tree, not caring who might see them."

Not great literature, but it's a turning point for my MC and it's nice to see him loosen up a bit.

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