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Old 02-17-2012, 03:29 PM   #26
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Old 02-17-2012, 04:03 PM   #27
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In her psychedelic sarong,
the bride beat feet to a beach bar,
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Old 02-25-2012, 11:09 AM   #28
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In her psychedelic sarong,
the bride beat feet to a beach bar,
dragging her new hubby along.
She tugged on him, pulled him just far
enough to see where the sky meets the shore--
and, there, they kissed---as one never to part.
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Old 03-07-2012, 02:50 AM   #29
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Guests in leis raised Mai Tais to toast before
the couple edged towards the coconut coast
framed in yellow hibiscus at the door.
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Old 05-06-2012, 02:12 AM   #30
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It was while in volumes of Poe engrossed
that I found myself in tune with a dream
as real as any daytime dreamer's ghosts
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Old 05-08-2012, 08:04 AM   #31
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But, unlikely as it would seem
When I returned (at last!) to Ogden Nash
I found that they did share a theme
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Old 05-08-2012, 09:26 AM   #32
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Purple dress and white shoes clash
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Old 05-14-2012, 12:13 AM   #33
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Swimming through the water midnight black
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Old 05-26-2012, 07:31 AM   #34
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Old 06-17-2012, 04:44 AM   #35
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Haystack rolled out to be dried
sat wondering how is the sky so blue
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