Where does my book fit?

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So I was writing a book about a witch that travels to the past and falls in love with some guy and eventually ends up saving the world. I originally wrote her in her early 20's but was told a MC has to be in the teens in order to be put in the YA slot. I originally thought it was content /style that put a book where it should be so now I'm confused and haven't written anything new since I'm not sure if i have to start completely over.

I want my book to be YA because I think the story line would fit best in that category but does the age really matter? Also I'm not quite sure how to categorize this book. Uh fantasy? Romance? I'm so clueless >.<
 

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What's the main story, the element that makes the novel? Is it the romance? Or the time travel? Or something else? That's your genre. It might be romance with fantasy elements, or it might be fantasy with romantic elements, depending on which is stronger. Of course, it doesn't really sound much like fantasy, just based on what you've said. Time travel tends to be sci-fi, but there may be other elements you haven't mentioned, as well. Not sure what other genres this might be.

I don't write YA, but I believe the characters do need to be teens for it to qualify. Could you just de-age the characters a little, make them younger? If not, it will probably have to be adult fiction.
 

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I really don't know what aspect is bigger, romance or magic. She fights another witch, which is how she ends up saving the world.

De-aging the MC I think would kinda ruin it. I eventually marry off the MC and I would hate it to be thought as a terrible Twilight #2.
 

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How about this: does the romance take up more pages (which is "Fantastic Romance" if the plot is only to drive the romance, or "Romantic Fantasy" if it serves another purpose) or does the quest to save the world (which would be fine to just say "Fantasy"--no need to get insane deciding high or low, mythic or dark, etc)?

There are also a million sub-genres, but the only reason to go there is if you want to. You might fit into historical fantasy or even one like portal fantasy (depending on how she goes back in time). DO NOT stress over a subgenre though. No agent is going to freak out if you don't tell them a sub-genre.
 
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I don't think 20 is too old. The YA genre isn't just about being a teenager, the subject must appeal to young adults as well.
 

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Age matters big time in YA from my understanding because it's about how teenagers view the world. If the characters aren't teenagers then the story isn't about a teenage view of the situation and that's why it's not YA even if a teenager might also enjoy the story.

As to genre, is the romance just one among many things that happens, as in character falls in love and character saves the world and travels back through time and each of these are sort of their own adventures (which would point toward fantasy with a romantic subplot), or is the romance the center of the story with the time travel or saving the world being the way the lovers meet, what keeps them together or draws them closer to each other, and what results from their love (this would point toward romance)? I'm not sure there's any definitive way for someone who hasn't read your manuscript to tell you what it is, but these might be things to think about.
 

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Thanks guys, based on what you said it definitely would be romance-fantasy. As for the age thing, that majorly blows. I really would hate to change the story just because of her age. I guess for the time being I'll keep it the way it is and get a betas opinion when I'm done. Thanks again!
 

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Hi! So, this may be the wrong spot to ask this, but as my question is pretty much the exact inverse of Delvianna01's I figured I'd ask.

The question specifically is this: Does a (fantasy) novel which deals heavily with arguably adult themes such as class prejudice, the value of human life, and the universal fear of mortality automatically fall under YA simply because the protagonist happens to be seventeen? I'm talking about a rather dark and, quite frankly, gory piece of work here. Is the age of the protagonist the only factor in defining the line between YA and adult fantasy?
 

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According to agent Kristin Nelson, the defining characteristic of YA fiction is when the protagonist begins the story as a child/teenager and by the end of the story has passed irrevocably into adulthood. There's no going back to being a child again. This journey is not a reference to age so much as it is the maturing effect the events of the story have on the protagonist.

Write your story the way you envision it. Worry about how to market it later.
 

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Thanks you guys. I have very little experience with YA, and have been...I don't want to say "worried", but definitely curious if I've been writing something I didn't intend to. It's just sort of a control issue. Your advice has been most helpful.
 

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I was told a YA protagonist could be aged up to about 21 by the end of a series, but probably not older than that.
 

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The driving desire in a romance is his or her desire for him or her. If that is not what drives the plot, then it's not a romance. Fantasy and sci-fi is setting. It's not what drives the plot. You can have a romance in any setting, sci-fi, fantasy, old west, etc.

If the desire that drives the story is to save the world, then it's not a romance. That can be a secondary desire, but the driving force of the story must be for the main character to get the other.

I haven't read any YA with a 20-year-old, personally.
 

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The protagonist at the beginning of the series needs to be a teen. There is absolutely no getting around that. But at the same time you can have dark mature themes in YA, just as you can in adult, V Rose.

But just because you have a teen protag doesn't mean that your book is YA. The best way to find out if your book is YA? Read some YA.

jaksen: indeed. My friend wrote the WONDROUS STRANGE series which is set in contemporary NY. The main character is 17, has left school to pursue an acting career. She's living on her own, and there is nothing about highschool in the book at all. It's still YA. My book features two 16 yearolds and one 17 yearold. It's set in 1900 London, and as such they have full time jobs and while their thoughts have all the insecurities of a teen, and their story arc sees them "growing up", they are still treated as adults in their world.

YA is more than just age, it is tone. And tone you can only truly understand by, you know, actually reading the genre. But yes, your main character must be a teen.
 
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