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Old 04-30-2012, 09:18 PM   #1
Forlorn Radiance
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Breaking up scenes

I don't know if there is a formal "right way" to do this, but I figure I'd ask better minds. In a lot of the books I read, if the scene changes, but the POV stays the same, they use a line break:

person doing something

*line break*
person does something else 20 minutes later

If the scene and the POV changes, they use an astrix/border:

person does something

***

another person does something else

My question is this: what if the change of scene is a flashback from years past? Does that count as a simple line break, or is that enough of a gap in the story to use a border? Ie:

Something happens to someone

line break OR ***

flashback

line break OR ***

Continue with previous scene.


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Last edited by Forlorn Radiance; 04-30-2012 at 09:23 PM. Reason: forum didnt recognize my line breaks, so i inserted *line break* instead.
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