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Thick skin:Check. Published book:?
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Virginia Beach, VA
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Breaking up scenes
I don't know if there is a formal "right way" to do this, but I figure I'd ask better minds. In a lot of the books I read, if the scene changes, but the POV stays the same, they use a line break:
person doing something *line break* person does something else 20 minutes later If the scene and the POV changes, they use an astrix/border: person does something *** another person does something else My question is this: what if the change of scene is a flashback from years past? Does that count as a simple line break, or is that enough of a gap in the story to use a border? Ie: Something happens to someone line break OR *** flashback line break OR *** Continue with previous scene. Sorry if this sounds or looks a little awkward for a post, but I've been up for 96 hrs, gotta love my job.
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The 1st Book of the Eden Series: Awakening 53,691/100,000 words Last edited by Forlorn Radiance; 04-30-2012 at 09:23 PM. Reason: forum didnt recognize my line breaks, so i inserted *line break* instead. |
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