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Old 06-05-2012, 10:14 AM   #11
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So, when does it go on for too long?
How long is a piece of string?

Seriously though, I think if the triangle continues past the point where it's obvious who the herione will choose then it's gone on for too long. An indecisive heroine is bad enough, but an indecisive herione who's too scared *cough* selfish *cough* to actually tell the poor schmuck he's not the one is worse.
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