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Old 06-27-2012, 04:46 PM   #8301
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Waiting for the change
Smashed the beaver into duck
Still no platypus
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Old 06-27-2012, 05:38 PM   #8302
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Still no platypus.
Pondering dichotomy,
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Old 06-27-2012, 05:46 PM   #8303
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Never knowing why
The dryer swallows one sock,
We'll go to our graves
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Old 06-27-2012, 06:08 PM   #8304
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Old 06-28-2012, 07:39 AM   #8305
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Old 06-28-2012, 04:19 PM   #8306
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B.D. Eyeslie has earned our admirationB.D. Eyeslie has earned our admirationB.D. Eyeslie has earned our admirationB.D. Eyeslie has earned our admiration
Heaven's isle opens
the crushing surf around me--
board in paradise.

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Old 06-28-2012, 05:43 PM   #8307
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Board in paradise
Still costs less than rent on earth,
Silly universe!
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Old 06-28-2012, 10:08 PM   #8308
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Silly universe
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Old 06-29-2012, 01:17 AM   #8309
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Old 06-29-2012, 08:07 PM   #8310
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wall street journal divided
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Old 06-30-2012, 05:24 PM   #8311
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"Sparing nutcrackers?"
My ass! Bastard's gonna pay!
Ballbuster, Baby.
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Albert says, “Hello?”
I’m on my tiptoes, trying to get that stupid phonebook to stay put.
Albert goes, “No. That was Mikie.”
I drop the phone book.
Albert goes, “Albert Jerome Sparks.”
I turn around on that chair and watch the fuckfest ‘cause right then I know that’s what it is.
~ M. Sparks, EFFIN' ALBERT

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Old 07-01-2012, 01:52 AM   #8312
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Ballbuster, Baby
expoding, erupting buds
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Old 07-02-2012, 03:23 AM   #8313
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color time sizzled
rainbow-trippin' dancer girl
down on Bongo Blue

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Old 07-02-2012, 08:01 PM   #8314
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Down on Bongo Blues
babbled brook, rippled raindrops
rainbowed under
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Old 07-03-2012, 12:27 AM   #8315
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Rainbowed under
an assured smile, the child knows
it has no feelings.
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Old 07-03-2012, 09:24 AM   #8316
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Old 07-03-2012, 03:50 PM   #8317
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Feet stomp without thought,
and of course, those lock-tight eyes.
Ice cream to follow.
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Old 07-04-2012, 04:17 AM   #8318
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Ice cream to follow
the lies you always feed me--
zero tolerance
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Old 07-04-2012, 04:47 AM   #8319
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frozen snowblankets whitewashed
mountianous dunes stand
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Old 07-04-2012, 02:15 PM   #8320
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Mountainous dunes stand.
Trip-eyed trout sing "O-hi-O."
Nuclear fishin'. . .
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Albert says, “Hello?”
I’m on my tiptoes, trying to get that stupid phonebook to stay put.
Albert goes, “No. That was Mikie.”
I drop the phone book.
Albert goes, “Albert Jerome Sparks.”
I turn around on that chair and watch the fuckfest ‘cause right then I know that’s what it is.
~ M. Sparks, EFFIN' ALBERT

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Old 07-05-2012, 07:06 AM   #8321
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Nuclear fishin...
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Old 07-06-2012, 08:57 AM   #8322
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i love haiku so much, thanks to share with us, i really like it,
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Old 07-06-2012, 03:47 PM   #8323
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Poppy is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPoppy is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPoppy is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPoppy is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPoppy is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPoppy is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPoppy is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPoppy is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPoppy is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPoppy is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPoppy is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
giants paradise
somewhere at the end of a
very tall beanstalk
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Old 07-06-2012, 07:41 PM   #8324
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Old 07-06-2012, 09:06 PM   #8325
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Jolly green giant,
taunted, spilling tears like rain.
How's the weather, girl?
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Albert says, “Hello?”
I’m on my tiptoes, trying to get that stupid phonebook to stay put.
Albert goes, “No. That was Mikie.”
I drop the phone book.
Albert goes, “Albert Jerome Sparks.”
I turn around on that chair and watch the fuckfest ‘cause right then I know that’s what it is.
~ M. Sparks, EFFIN' ALBERT
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