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Old 07-07-2012, 04:17 AM   #8326
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How's the weather, girl?
It's extremely hot here in
South Mississippi.
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Old 07-08-2012, 06:51 PM   #8327
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South Mississippi?
M-I-S-S-I-S-S-
I love Miss'ippi.

Sorry, it's the best I could come up with.
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Old 07-08-2012, 08:18 PM   #8328
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I love Miss'ippi,
jet-eyed beauty, raven hair,
lip drippin' honey.

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Old 07-09-2012, 07:24 AM   #8329
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Old 07-11-2012, 08:25 AM   #8330
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Old 07-12-2012, 05:25 PM   #8331
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Honeycomb delights?
I'm sick to death of honey.
I want chocolate.
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Old 07-12-2012, 11:16 PM   #8332
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I want choc-o-late:
melt-in-mouth, finger-suckin'
lickin' sticky brown.

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Old 07-15-2012, 09:50 PM   #8333
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I can't wait any longer. All right. . .um. . .


Lickin' Sticky Brown.
Dreamin' on it all damn day,
sweet potato pie.

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Old 07-16-2012, 02:13 AM   #8334
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Sweet potato pie --
so good you take off your shoes
to wiggle your toes.
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Old 07-16-2012, 07:31 AM   #8335
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Old 07-16-2012, 10:22 AM   #8336
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folding the hill with footsteps
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Old 07-16-2012, 07:57 PM   #8337
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Old 07-17-2012, 05:38 PM   #8338
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Old 07-17-2012, 06:31 PM   #8339
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Stifles the morning--
gunshots from a distant field
startle grazing deer.
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Old 07-17-2012, 08:27 PM   #8340
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Old 07-18-2012, 03:18 AM   #8341
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dew upon meadow
the peach fuzz on your lower back
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Old 07-18-2012, 01:44 PM   #8342
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Small glory of light,
pinpoint through the keyhole, my
salvation denied.

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Old 07-18-2012, 05:55 PM   #8343
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Salvation denied,
I take my worn, beaten cross
And seek out the fire.
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Old 07-18-2012, 07:43 PM   #8344
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And seek out the fire
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Old 07-18-2012, 08:32 PM   #8345
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end salvation's quest
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Old 07-20-2012, 05:10 AM   #8346
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The road was the life:
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Old 07-20-2012, 05:15 AM   #8347
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Old 07-21-2012, 07:33 AM   #8348
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Old 07-21-2012, 03:24 PM   #8349
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endless memories
tumble from a child's tea cup,
mortal's mourning doux.

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Old 07-22-2012, 07:18 PM   #8350
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mortal's mourning doux
each act bittersweet through our flaws
yet worthy for aims
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