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#8327 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
Posts: 791
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South Mississippi?
M-I-S-S-I-S-S- I love Miss'ippi. Sorry, it's the best I could come up with. |
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#8328 |
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Huh.
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: Left of center.
Posts: 2,803
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I love Miss'ippi,
jet-eyed beauty, raven hair, lip drippin' honey. Last edited by kkbe; 07-09-2012 at 03:36 AM. Reason: edit on da fly |
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#8329 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 1,137
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lip-drippin' honey
honeycombs doodled ore beehive secret life |
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#8330 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 1,137
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bees secret life
nectar flowering sunshine honeycomb delights |
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#8331 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
Posts: 791
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Honeycomb delights?
I'm sick to death of honey. I want chocolate. |
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#8332 |
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Huh.
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: Left of center.
Posts: 2,803
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I want choc-o-late:
melt-in-mouth, finger-suckin' lickin' sticky brown. Last edited by kkbe; 07-15-2012 at 10:45 PM. |
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#8333 |
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Huh.
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: Left of center.
Posts: 2,803
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I can't wait any longer. All right. . .um. . .
Lickin' Sticky Brown. Dreamin' on it all damn day, sweet potato pie. Last edited by kkbe; 07-15-2012 at 10:45 PM. |
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#8334 |
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
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Sweet potato pie --
so good you take off your shoes to wiggle your toes. |
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#8335 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 1,137
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to wiggle toes
repetious momentum muscular delight |
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#8336 |
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
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muscular delight
folding the hill with footsteps to reveal the dawn |
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#8337 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 1,137
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to reveal the dawn
one fiery ball rises cacophony ceased |
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#8338 |
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shhh, I'm writing
Join Date: Jun 2011
Location: northeastern Illinois
Posts: 454
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cacophany ceased
silence like a wool blanket stifles the morning
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"Any writer . . . finds that the things which hurt him and the things which helped him cannot be divorced from each other."—James Baldwin WIP: Historical fiction—TAMB (title is a state secret )
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#8339 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
Posts: 791
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Stifles the morning--
gunshots from a distant field startle grazing deer. |
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#8340 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 1,137
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startle grazing deer
morning scents, tickled whiskers dew upon meadow |
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#8341 |
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
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dew upon meadow
the peach fuzz on your lower back small glory of light |
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#8342 |
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Huh.
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: Left of center.
Posts: 2,803
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Small glory of light,
pinpoint through the keyhole, my salvation denied. Last edited by kkbe; 07-18-2012 at 02:43 PM. Reason: i.e.e. |
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#8343 |
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Do not taunt Happy Fun Mod
AW Moderator
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: the everlasting universe of things
Posts: 3,606
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Salvation denied,
I take my worn, beaten cross And seek out the fire. |
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#8344 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 1,137
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And seek out the fire
crusaders holy journey end salvations quest |
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#8345 |
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Claims the loan was a gift
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: "site, place, position" --Roget's Thesaurus
Posts: 3,600
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end salvation's quest
and in our moments now, love the road was the life |
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#8346 |
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Do not taunt Happy Fun Mod
AW Moderator
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: the everlasting universe of things
Posts: 3,606
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The road was the life:
midnight truck stops, morning joe, exits seen and passed. |
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#8347 |
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Claims the loan was a gift
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: "site, place, position" --Roget's Thesaurus
Posts: 3,600
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exits seen and passed
as auditions always end still the actor strives |
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#8348 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 1,137
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Still the actor strives
emotional expressions endless memories |
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#8349 |
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Huh.
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: Left of center.
Posts: 2,803
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endless memories
tumble from a child's tea cup, mortal's mourning doux. Last edited by kkbe; 07-21-2012 at 06:20 PM. |
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#8350 |
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Claims the loan was a gift
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: "site, place, position" --Roget's Thesaurus
Posts: 3,600
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mortal's mourning doux
each act bittersweet through our flaws yet worthy for aims |
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