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Old 06-29-2012, 05:14 PM   #1
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Robert Frost Style Similarity

I just wancha all to know
My style's cold, quite Frosty, though
SYW won't see me stopping there
to crit this place filled up with poems

You'll probly all stop and sneer
at my post's claim and gall my ear;
to say, "tween these line's a stupid claim"
Forcing my defense all the year.

You'll fill my rep-box up with blame
and ask why I don't feel ashamed
The only other posts are mods'
Putting out the burning flames.

O forum lovely, dark and deep,
I must build a mighty keep
And guard my claim without no sleep
And guard my claim without no sleep

http://www.ketzle.com/frost/

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Old 06-29-2012, 05:20 PM   #2
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Bring it! I declare a poem-down, byatches. xD
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Old 06-29-2012, 07:18 PM   #3
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Ummm.

Cool poem, bro.
What exactly are you trying to do here?
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Old 06-29-2012, 08:00 PM   #4
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Old 06-29-2012, 09:01 PM   #5
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Those ain't poems.
And they feel too dim
for proper whim
or wit, or an attack.
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Old 06-29-2012, 09:34 PM   #6
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Yeah, but what does your horse think?

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Old 06-30-2012, 02:12 AM   #7
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Cheeky! But nothing like Frost

Reminds me of another unsubstantiated claim...
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Old 08-09-2012, 06:32 PM   #8
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cool bro! you should try writing songs
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