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Old 01-09-2013, 09:16 PM   #8676
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Old 01-10-2013, 07:45 AM   #8677
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Old 01-10-2013, 08:28 AM   #8678
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Old 01-10-2013, 02:20 PM   #8679
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my love unspoken.
kiss my mouth, imagining
sweet lips on mine. once.
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Old 01-10-2013, 06:19 PM   #8680
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Sweet lips on mine, once,
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Old 01-10-2013, 08:17 PM   #8681
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taste only dry dust.
was it only a dream, boy?
dream something juicy.
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Old 01-11-2013, 07:39 PM   #8682
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Dream something juicy--
hot and sensual, smooth, raw--
dance your heart to sleep.
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Old 01-13-2013, 12:27 AM   #8683
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Dance your heart to sleep.
Don't ever dream about him.
Neither, possible.
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The flour in Albertís hair donít last ten minutes. I end up trick-or-treating with a red-haired kid got a black dot on the end of his nose, wearing a giant bloody tee shirt. Albert don't care, he's having fun.

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Old 01-13-2013, 01:12 AM   #8684
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Neither possible:
that you should win back my heart,
or be cleansed away.
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Old 01-13-2013, 06:10 AM   #8685
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Or be cleansed away.
Or swept away in silence.
Neither pleases me.

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Old 01-13-2013, 06:39 AM   #8686
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Niether pleases me
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Old 01-13-2013, 05:43 PM   #8687
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Old 01-13-2013, 06:30 PM   #8688
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Old 01-13-2013, 08:29 PM   #8689
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Old 01-14-2013, 05:45 AM   #8690
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Stepping stones, anew
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Forgotten, the flood
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Though left unspoken,
our words hang in heavy air.
Thunderstorms, regret.
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From every instance,
blind. Or set to blind. To see
Or not to see, Yorick.

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