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Old 01-24-2013, 02:25 AM   #8726
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beneath Earth's red rust
single thought uncurls, stretching--
only to be squashed
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Old 01-24-2013, 02:36 AM   #8727
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only to be squashed
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hero, Iron Man
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Old 01-24-2013, 12:04 PM   #8728
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Hero, Iron man,
frightened little boy rewrites
his own short story

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Old 01-24-2013, 01:42 PM   #8729
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his own short story
is garbled junk, total mess
will nothing save it?
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Old 01-24-2013, 09:32 PM   #8730
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will nothing save it
curled wilted cracked wee petals
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Old 01-24-2013, 10:16 PM   #8731
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ideas plant within
strife, grow in conflict, harvest
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Old 01-25-2013, 01:56 AM   #8732
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Old 01-25-2013, 02:02 AM   #8733
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In gardens of ice
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Old 01-25-2013, 04:00 AM   #8734
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prisms multiply,
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Old 01-25-2013, 07:42 AM   #8735
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Of my prison state
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Old 01-25-2013, 04:19 PM   #8736
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Old 01-25-2013, 05:33 PM   #8737
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Old 01-25-2013, 06:50 PM   #8738
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Your arms warm around me.
I almost believe you care
for me, Christian Grey.

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Old 01-25-2013, 07:34 PM   #8739
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for me, Christian Grey
is best played by Matt Bomer
o chiselled man-god
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Old 01-26-2013, 12:22 AM   #8740
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o chiselled man-god
how come you are on your Sloan
Tod? Ye god. Ye clod.

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Old 01-27-2013, 02:21 PM   #8741
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Old 01-27-2013, 08:33 PM   #8742
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Old 01-27-2013, 10:13 PM   #8743
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Your secrets in shade?
Uh uh. She wrote everything.
It's a best-seller.


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Old 01-28-2013, 04:02 AM   #8744
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It's a best seller
though I'm the worst for it.
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Old 01-28-2013, 05:19 AM   #8745
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Old 01-28-2013, 08:21 AM   #8746
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Old 01-28-2013, 08:14 PM   #8747
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Foretell the future
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Old 01-28-2013, 08:38 PM   #8748
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like a crystal ball,
the child's pale blue eyes reflect
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some forgotten place
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probing. I keep still.
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Old 01-29-2013, 09:02 AM   #8750
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probing. I keep still
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