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Old 02-01-2013, 07:11 AM   #8776
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Old 02-01-2013, 08:11 PM   #8777
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Dripping black into the ground,
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Old 02-01-2013, 08:20 PM   #8778
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kkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
Stench of molten rock?
Come on. Gimme more than your
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Old 02-01-2013, 09:27 PM   #8779
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Old 02-01-2013, 11:38 PM   #8780
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to higher than high.
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Old 02-02-2013, 12:08 AM   #8781
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To higher than high,
I reach my hand and pluck you
from that starry sky. . .
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Old 02-02-2013, 12:47 AM   #8782
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Old 02-02-2013, 04:53 AM   #8783
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Harder than he leapt,
he dreamt, harder still awoke,
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Old 02-02-2013, 05:07 AM   #8784
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Paul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
bruis'd, but stars in hand,
he watched as they slipped
through his clasped fingers
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Old 02-02-2013, 06:49 AM   #8785
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kkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskkbe is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
Through his clasped fingers
silver rivers slide; heavy
metal, his demise.
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Old 02-02-2013, 07:24 AM   #8786
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Metal, his damn eyes
follow me and do not blink.
I close mine, and run.
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Old 02-02-2013, 09:06 PM   #8787
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B.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolness
I close mine, and run
every time the ayes have it.
Stubborn reaction.
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Old 02-02-2013, 09:26 PM   #8788
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Putputt is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPutputt is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPutputt is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPutputt is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPutputt is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPutputt is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPutputt is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPutputt is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPutputt is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPutputt is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPutputt is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
Stubborn reaction
Ignores all medication
Damn you, eczema!
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Old 02-03-2013, 02:01 AM   #8789
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Damn you, eczema!
mini death poetry line
epidermally

(experience the silence?)
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Old 02-03-2013, 04:43 AM   #8790
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Paul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
epidermally
encased. I peek through my
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Old 02-03-2013, 02:47 PM   #8791
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Cold, translucent skin
holding in that pulsing thing.
Poke it with a stick.
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Old 02-03-2013, 03:06 PM   #8792
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Poke it with a stick
But make sure to be prepared
To run when it wakes.
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Old 02-04-2013, 02:39 AM   #8793
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To run? When it wakes,
we will crawl on our bellies,
tongueless, eyeless, trapped.
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Old 02-05-2013, 04:55 AM   #8794
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Tongueless, eyeless, trapped.
Quasimodo cries out. 'Quell
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Old 02-05-2013, 06:18 AM   #8795
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The bells', Fruitlessly
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Old 02-05-2013, 06:06 PM   #8796
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entranced delights grow
pickleeria somber
shiny toenails sing

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Old 02-06-2013, 05:40 AM   #8797
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Shiny toenails sing:
Tra-la! Even sparkly paints
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Old 02-06-2013, 11:50 AM   #8798
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Don't unstink your feet
I like them just fine that way
Cheesy. Musky. You.

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Old 02-06-2013, 06:58 PM   #8799
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Cheesy. Musky. You
overwhelm the senses, boy.
Your stench precedes you.
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