I go to a meeting once a week at the library. A few of the local writers gather to write about prompts and share their work. Some of the members have been providing me with some valuable feedback about how to improve. I am finally able to catch their attention with my story writing. My first problem was trying to connect each event to each other, without having my writing feel jumpy.
Now, I'm focusing on keeping constant tension in my stories. When I stopped to think about it, most novels that I've completed have been stories that I did not want to stop reading, because I always had to know what was going to happen. I have been concentrating on causing enough sensible conflict to keep people interested. It's tricky, but I'm getting better at it.