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In a story I'm working on, the narrator is a colleague of who I'd say my main character is. The story is all about her, his observations and memories of her.
Yet, because it's told in his voice (first person), I need to show something of him as well. What I can't decide is how much transformation and conflict to throw at him since I want the focus to mainly be on her. Any suggestions?
Yet, because it's told in his voice (first person), I need to show something of him as well. What I can't decide is how much transformation and conflict to throw at him since I want the focus to mainly be on her. Any suggestions?