Hi, first time posting here. These are the first three lines of my fantasy WIP, would love to hear what you all think
When I awoke this morning to the ever constant clack of the train wheels on the rails , I knew something was different. I could feel it in the sharp points of my bones, in the warm pit of my stomach, that today was not like any other day. I assumed at first that this feeling would shake itself loose after I had woken up properly
Welcome lrose20!
The main problems here are the waking up and the "today was not like any other day." Both are cliche. Agents have seen waking up openings a jillion times in their career. It's the worst period of time to open a story because it's so cliche. Stating that "today is a special day" isn't really saying anything at all. It would be much more effective to explain why today is different or show how it's different with a character doing something to make it unique.
I suggest starting at another point in the story with something fresh and engaging for the reader. I'd be willing to bet you can do a lot better.
Oh, you also need a period at the end of the third sentence.
Good luck.