script swap?

Does anybody want to trade scripts for feedback and critique? I wrote a tv pilot that I'd like to enter into a contest but I really need feedback. I already did a trade with one person so this is the second draft. If you've written a tv pilot/spec script before that'd be extra helpful. I've only written features and shorts before so I would also love to know how I'm doing on format and timing. I'm open to critiquing full feature scripts but I love to learn by example so if you are writing for TV let's talk!

Thank you! All genres are welcome. Please email me at my regular email - [email protected].

got it!

Hey Manuel,
Just saw it. I shall respond in a moment...

Thank you!
Melissa

hello, thank you for responding. I don't know if I have time to do critiques on features right now. But I do have a feature thriller I'm planning to start working on again in a few months. If you can wait a month or so I'll be ready then. You can go ahead and email me what you have though, [email protected], and we'll keep chatting through email. The above posters could also potentially switch with each other for immediate feedback.