Close-up formatting question?

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Hi all - I took a screenwriting class ages ago, and then have been writing mostly prose so don't remember a lot of what I learned. Hoping you can help me out with a formatting question for a close-up of a newspaper. I've heard you generally shouldn't use camera direction in scripts, but I feel like this is important to the plot and needs to be shown..

Here's the scenario:

A man is walking through the kitchen and sets down a coffee mug on a table next to a newspaper. I then want to do a close-up of the newspaper to show the headlines.

Would it be something like...

INT. KITCHEN - DAY
Description of kitchen goes here.

John sets his coffee next to a faded newspaper.

CUT TO:
CLOSE UP of NEWSPAPER.
The newspaper shows a black and white photo of a smiling woman. The headline reads "Woman saves man from choking."


Then just switch to a new Scene Heading?
 

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Doesn't need to be complicated.

INT. KITCHEN - DAY

John sets his coffee next to a faded newspaper.

The headline reads, WOMAN SAVES MAN FROM CHOKING.

There's a B/W pic of a smiling woman.

John sips his coffee.

...Shrug, just a suggestion.

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This is how I handle it:

INT. KITCHEN - DAY

scene description. John throws the morning paper down.

HEADLINE: MAN SAVES WOMAN.

A black and white photo of...