Can I get some opinions on this drama short? [content removed]

cornflake

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Hi -

Something like this should go in the Share Your Work Screenwriting section (password: vista), and you probably want to paste your stuff in, people aren't big on clicking.

However, you need 50 posts under your belt before you can post your own work for critique. You're welcome to check out others' work and comment on it - that's a good way to work toward your posts.