I need help from someone with writing experience

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I am new here and I'm a young writer and I wrote this screenplay about a christian man who’s life is turned upside down by a series of catastrophic incidents and through it all and while trying to get his life back on track, he discovers the truth about God and religion. I hopefully plan on directing myself but before I go any further forward with the screenplay, I was wondering if someone here who has writing or screenwriting experience, could read and critique for me, to see if they think the story’s good or not or needs work. I would truly appreciate it, thanks.
 

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