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I've heard it's (mostly) up to you, but I feel like people enjoy it more when the POV character's opinions permeate everything. I'm not talking about paragraphs of internalisation but thoughts that blend in with everything else.
Unfortunately I struggle with coming up with little snippets of opinion for the various things my POV characters come across...
Unfortunately I struggle with coming up with little snippets of opinion for the various things my POV characters come across...