I recently had someone comment that my use of the word now in past tense narration seemed jarring. I've seen this in many published books, and it has never bothered me. I wouldn't use it in academic writing, but it seems fine to me in fiction.
My example sentence was this:
Even now, he felt like he had bugs crawling all over him.
What does everyone think?
My example sentence was this:
Even now, he felt like he had bugs crawling all over him.
What does everyone think?