I think this depends on how you write it. Some people will be turned off to the simple idea of rape, some to how you describe it/use it, and some to what you're using it for. You can't win at everything, just don't try to lose.
Personally, I don't care--you have to establish their the villain somehow. I'm a pretty tolerant reader for these types of things.
I think it's executed very well and tastefully. Nothing too graphic except for a little violence. It's part of a little flashback when the antagonist experiences a blackout. Then it gets into where he was and what happened the first time he ever experienced one. When he comes to the first time. He's on top of a helpless bartender raping her. So, it's not like he set out to rape this woman. It was just a side effect of his blackout. The whole thing (the rape) is maybe 200 words, tops.
You're never going to write such a charged scene in a way that won't turn anyone off. My questions would be if the tone and level of intensity in the scene fits those of other scenes in the book. If the rest of the book is PG-13, R, or NC-17, that scene should be too.
I would say for the most part the book would be rated R if not a strong PG-13. And it does seem to fit with the tone and intensity of the rest of the book. Horror, blood, thrills, laughs.
3) Have just 200-400 words of his internal monologue of his reasons why it had to be done, then just go into the 'real' first chapter where the MC learns what the evil bastard did.
The scene is part of a small flashback. The antagonist has his first
blackout and comes to, raping this bartender. The act itself is at the most 200 words. And when I say it's done "tastefully" I mean I don't use any graphic words to describe what exactly happens sexually. But you can paint a very vague picture in your head when you read it.
1.) You have a 100% certainty of turning
some readers off.
2.) This is true of almost anything, so be true to your story.
And GL.
Thanks for the words of wisdom. I'll keep that in mind
You should read this thread:
http://absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=271819
If I were you, I would find a more creative way of showing your antagonist is evil, because I suspect most of your audience will have one of the following reactions to a "kick the dog" rape scene: (1) anger, (2) eyerolling, (3) boredom.
I'll be sure to check that thread out, soon. The scene is not to show he's evil, well not really, anyway. It rather a tiny flashback of something that happened. Of course the reader gathers he's evil because of it but that's not the sole reason he did it. He suffers a blackout and "wakes up" during the crime.
Thanks for your view on it. Obviously, I'm questioning it because it is such an iffy topic.
If you know why it has to be rape and it wouldn't work any other way, then just write it.
I hear what you're saying. And I already have it written. Just not sure if I should keep it or not because of the tough subject matter and how people usually deal with the topic of rape.
This. Though, if you're asking the question, it seems that perhaps it could be dealt with some other way.
The reason I'm asking is because no one is comfortable with the subject of rape. It's such a heinous and despicable act. I feel its done very graciously and it adds to the background of the character. It's not there just for the fun of it.
The bottom line is I don't want to have something in my book that's going to make people put it down and run away from it like some life threatening disease.
I feel like I'm retyping some of the same answers to all of you hah.
Thanks to you all, seriously for all the feedback on this.